07-27-2020, 10:22 PM | #1 |
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Wanderer 2-2 vs Bomb Bard 2-2 - BOMB BARD WINS
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07-29-2020, 11:40 AM | #3 |
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Another lobster napkin. What is happening? Just quit all this bitch
Last 3 pics have given us Claws.. & we still can’t get to grips with ur shit My guy WHY u so obsessed with crustaceans? I need to ask Next time u under plastic after getting served them shells it’ll be ur last Tho seafood does makes sense when ur shitty face is a lure That spot’s a red beacon on ur forehead guiding fisherman into shore Healthy people mock this unfit slob.. u should be fuckin dead Even the athlete on that guy’s back wants to throw a football at ur head If u are what u eat, deserts gon’ match how this geek is dressed Wearing an oversized t-shirt to hide the fact ur built like an Eton mess Looking like a moron. Gets food & his face just slaps in the bowl If Dumb & Dumber had a Dumbest I’m almost certain u’d be cast in that role |
07-30-2020, 06:07 PM | #4 |
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Listen Gremlin...
Ur jus a creature w/hair! Like you only rep In The night Thought I saw Gizmo but w/these eyes & teeth ? ur the resurrection of Stripe! Last fight I punched ur face in! Now I’m beatin you dead Guess I only pushed ur bottom jaw in & left 4 teeth in ur head Your wife a shaky 2! But I get in them thighs great She seizure cock & faints, while I hit & knock her eyes straight Her over bite is fucked. Mouth game is dumb dude Only thing that shines on your half of this battle? Is ur wife’s front tooth Ur head a plant that’ll never grow! Swhy u sour ked That body ain’t Guarding Hoes! But ur wife’s teeth could weed a flower bed The AR is for high risk. Bel let’s get stored in a dude I ain’t talkin about that attic above you when I put a hole in your roof Last edited by Bomb Bard; 07-31-2020 at 10:52 PM. |
08-01-2020, 09:04 AM | #5 |
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Fisherman Dumb and dumber line was a terrible bar btw just awful Vs Eyes straight Flower bed Spree didn’t write the dumb and dumber bar so he wins Vote bomb |
08-02-2020, 03:00 PM | #6 |
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Another lobster napkin. What is happening? Just quit all this bitch
Last 3 pics have given us Claws.. & we still can’t get to grips with ur shit Nice opener My guy WHY u so obsessed with crustaceans? I need to ask Next time u under plastic after getting served them shells it’ll be ur last Wording slightly off but it’s nice Tho seafood does makes sense when ur shitty face is a lure That spot’s a red beacon on ur forehead guiding fisherman into shore not sure on this one Healthy people mock this unfit slob.. u should be fuckin dead Even the athlete on that guy’s back wants to throw a football at ur head Ok If u are what u eat, deserts gon’ match how this geek is dressed Wearing an oversized t-shirt to hide the fact ur built like an Eton mess Lol random concept, Looking like a moron. Gets food & his face just slaps in the bowl If Dumb & Dumber had a Dumbest I’m almost certain u’d be cast in that role dont like this Listen Gremlin... Ur jus a creature w/hair! Like you only rep In The night Thought I saw Gizmo but w/these eyes & teeth ? ur the resurrection of Stripe! lol nice Last fight I punched ur face in! Now I’m beatin you dead Guess I only pushed ur bottom jaw in & left 4 teeth in ur head Ok Your wife a shaky 2! But I get in them thighs great She seizure cock & faints, while I hit & knock her eyes straight Seizure works as a wp but the tie-in doesn’t really Her over bite is fucked. Mouth game is dumb dude Only thing that shines on your half of this battle? Is ur wife’s front tooth Lol Ur head a plant that’ll never grow! Swhy u sour ked That body ain’t Guarding Hoes! But ur wife’s teeth could weed a flower bed Lol The AR is for high risk. Bel let’s get stored in a dude I ain’t talkin about that attic above you when I put a hole in your roof This is ok Both had hits and misses. Bomb bard had funnier disses to me but the wp like guarding weren’t great. This is real close to me but I will decide it on who had most misses which is wanderer Vote - bomb |
08-03-2020, 10:44 AM | #7 |
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Under plastic and red beacon were cool
Eyes straight and front tooth were cool Eyes straight LOTB vote bomb
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08-03-2020, 12:16 PM | #8 |
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Another lobster napkin. What is happening? Just quit all this bitch
Last 3 pics have given us Claws.. & we still can’t get to grips with ur shit ok My guy WHY u so obsessed with crustaceans? I need to ask Next time u under plastic after getting served them shells it’ll be ur last nah Tho seafood does makes sense when ur shitty face is a lure That spot’s a red beacon on ur forehead guiding fisherman into shore cool hha Healthy people mock this unfit slob.. u should be fuckin dead Even the athlete on that guy’s back wants to throw a football at ur head mild If u are what u eat, deserts gon’ match how this geek is dressed Wearing an oversized t-shirt to hide the fact ur built like an Eton mess not feeling this Looking like a moron. Gets food & his face just slaps in the bowl If Dumb & Dumber had a Dumbest I’m almost certain u’d be cast in that role haha nice vs. Listen Gremlin... Ur jus a creature w/hair! Like you only rep In The night Thought I saw Gizmo but w/these eyes & teeth ? ur the resurrection of Stripe! not getting this Last fight I punched ur face in! Now I’m beatin you dead Guess I only pushed ur bottom jaw in & left 4 teeth in ur head decent Your wife a shaky 2! But I get in them thighs great She seizure cock & faints, while I hit & knock her eyes straight cool Her over bite is fucked. Mouth game is dumb dude Only thing that shines on your half of this battle? Is ur wife’s front tooth cool Ur head a plant that’ll never grow! Swhy u sour ked That body ain’t Guarding Hoes! But ur wife’s teeth could weed a flower bed went to the wrong direction The AR is for high risk. Bel let’s get stored in a dude I ain’t talkin about that attic above you when I put a hole in your roof not hitting I feel like spree could have taken different angles at his concepts that could have been more harsher.. after seeing wanderers pic and verse I thought spree would get this but at the end I'm having wanderer with more consistency / comedy overall |
08-03-2020, 01:34 PM | #9 |
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Another lobster napkin. What is happening? Just quit all this bitch
Last 3 pics have given us Claws.. & we still can’t get to grips with ur shit I really like this concept but 'last 3 pics have given us Claws' reads a little awkward. Almost like I should be looking for a flip there but don't see one My guy WHY u so obsessed with crustaceans? I need to ask Next time u under plastic after getting served them shells it’ll be ur last under plastic and served with shells is kind of overkill. like, is he under the sheet/bag already and you're still shooting? I can't tell what exactly you're going for Tho seafood does makes sense when ur shitty face is a lure That spot’s a red beacon on ur forehead guiding fisherman into shore lol I like it but it's missing something. imo it would be stronger with just a 'it could' rather than 'it is' but that's just nitpicking Healthy people mock this unfit slob.. u should be fuckin dead Even the athlete on that guy’s back wants to throw a football at ur head cool If u are what u eat, deserts gon’ match how this geek is dressed Wearing an oversized t-shirt to hide the fact ur built like an Eton mess really niche reference. Had to google both Eton mess and it's pronunciation (which I think is 'Eatin'). It could be dope, but it could use more with the 'eaton'/eating aspect of it Looking like a moron. Gets food & his face just slaps in the bowl If Dumb & Dumber had a Dumbest I’m almost certain u’d be cast in that role this is pure humor but isn't particularly funny Listen Gremlin... Ur jus a creature w/hair! Like you only rep In The night Thought I saw Gizmo but w/these eyes & teeth ? ur the resurrection of Stripe! alright this is the 'sharp googles things' battle of the week now. upon googling I kind of see the connection of eyes and teeth. It's loose, but works enough Last fight I punched ur face in! Now I’m beatin you dead Guess I only pushed ur bottom jaw in & left 4 teeth in ur head I like where this is coming from but since he's clearly making a face I think it'd be doper as 'after I kick your ass you'll resemble these aspects of your pic'... again, I'm nitpicking. This is okay Your wife a shaky 2! But I get in them thighs great She seizure cock & faints, while I hit & knock her eyes straight simple but funny. Light because I have to think her fainting upon seeing his cock means its big? But the way your bar ended saved this Her over bite is fucked. Mouth game is dumb dude Only thing that shines on your half of this battle? Is ur wife’s front tooth gone. lotb for me. I think the ? or the 'Is' is unnecessary. Could get by with one or the other Ur head a plant that’ll never grow! Swhy u sour ked That body ain’t Guarding Hoes! But ur wife’s teeth could weed a flower bed “ked” We have one entry that includes the term ked. sheep ked noun : a wingless bloodsucking dipteran fly (Melophagus ovinus) that feeds chiefly on sheep and is a vector of sheep trypanosomiasis https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kendri...ication_Device took me too long to realize you meant 'kid', which is a stretch written out imo. The setup is weird as fuck imo. The punch itself is good. We've all seen enough 'Hoe' flips that I was about to groan midway through the bar, but you did a nice job subverting that expectation. if the setup made more sense, this would be a better bar. As it stands, this is okay for me The AR is for high risk. Bel let’s get stored in a dude I ain’t talkin about that attic above you when I put a hole in your roof throwback to your week 1 verse with a really similar angle. It worked then, it works now. idk why I'm in a detail oriented mood today. My critique doesn't look like it but I enjoyed the reads. Wanderer had better concepts but Spree's execution was cleaner. It's close, but I think Spree takes because those punches just land more effectively to me. If I was more about concepts I'd probably give it to Wanderer because everything but his closer was workable (though no one else is googling 'Eton Mess', so that one's also kind of a bust). Close. Good battle guys v/ Bomb Bard |
08-03-2020, 06:00 PM | #10 |
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My guy WHY u so obsessed with crustaceans? I need to ask Next time u under plastic after getting served them shells it’ll be ur last If u are what u eat, deserts gon’ match how this geek is dressed Wearing an oversized t-shirt to hide the fact ur built like an Eton mess (giving this props even though i had to google Eton Mess, and that's saying something coming from a fat guy) Overall not one of your stronger verses. To me, personally. Still, had it's moments. Bard - Last fight I punched ur face in! Now I’m beatin you dead Guess I only pushed ur bottom jaw in & left 4 teeth in ur head Her over bite is fucked. Mouth game is dumb dude Only thing that shines on your half of this battle? Is ur wife’s front tooth Ur head a plant that’ll never grow! Swhy u sour ked That body ain’t Guarding Hoes! But ur wife’s teeth could weed a flower bed Also, not one of your best verses this week, overall. However, that flower bed line is quite easily LOTB and I think edged the whole thing for you here. Solid effort. V - Bard
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