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06-17-2013, 10:40 PM
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Saul Paul
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: remote location with a remote weapon station
Posts: 6,398
Battle Record: 16-26
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yo this was dope. I like the narration of it in the beginning and the carefully selected cinema in the layout of it. You really have a way with of making it readful and flow savvy without the normal usage of multis, even though it's setup that way. Kind of a breath of fresh air in that aspect. I loved how you continued the flow in bringing in the main part. shit was nice.
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