GWL PLAYOFFS ROUND 1- #2 JOHNNY 6 FEET (5-1) VS #11 MASTER ROCK (1-1) JOHNNY WINS/OPEN FOR FEED

Adverse · 07-24-2020, 06:09 AM

Johnny had a hyper literal take on the topic and honestly it was predictable and lacked the sort of mystique laced narrative that his previous two pieces had, I still enjoyed it though and it had some great imagery especially the landmines segment had some dope visuals. Not your best and a tad predictable but all in all it was a good effort.

Master Rock you had some nice visuals as well and I know you had to rush your verse this week but the short length of your narrative kind of killed your chances before you ever could start. Still enjoyed the imagery though

This was one was a runaway for Six

V/Johnny

07-24-2020, 06:09 AM	#1
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Johnny had a hyper literal take on the topic and honestly it was predictable and lacked the sort of mystique laced narrative that his previous two pieces had, I still enjoyed it though and it had some great imagery especially the landmines segment had some dope visuals. Not your best and a tad predictable but all in all it was a good effort. Master Rock you had some nice visuals as well and I know you had to rush your verse this week but the short length of your narrative kind of killed your chances before you ever could start. Still enjoyed the imagery though This was one was a runaway for Six V/Johnny