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07-10-2020, 02:45 PM
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Spoiled brat
Join Date: May 2020
Location: Detroit
Posts: 1,996
Battle Record: 25-3
Champed - Now Or Never 2020
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Wanderer you had a cool verse. Some of your concepts were forced and worded poorly. Newspaper delivery felt like you were trying to do anything to make it work but it fell flat. You did have some good ideas just executed them poorly.
Dave your style is cool. You keep things simple and witty. Throughout you had some nice hitters. Nothing crazy but you were jabbing well. This was a good battle but Dave got this with better execution and more wit. Good stuff gentlemen.
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