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06-29-2020, 11:05 PM
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White Earl
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: Philly Cat.
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Master rock was cool. Lost me in some spots with your scheme. Got a little to wordy and added 1 or 2 too many syllables once in a while. Concept was cool. Fun flex
Actually thought Exis came in and stole the show here, pretty solid. Nice way to close out dude. Concept was cool.
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