WEEK 11: Scar (4-2) vs Artifice (2-2) ART WINS

Adverse · 06-28-2020, 04:05 AM

Art - Seems like you've finally shaken your rust off and have returned to form. I liked the direction you took it, a super technical approach and tied it to the topic. Was a nice verse and I liked the idea of the "darkest ideas illuminating the darkness" that's just poetry in motion.

Scar - I liked your verse man and I loved the imagery throughout, you painted a marvelous scene and it was like art jumping off of the canvas. It popped! But i think you lost direction storywise? You definitely caught my attention much more than your opponent's verse but I was just lost at the subject matter. Good verse man but I agree we've seen you do much better!

V - Artifice I think he had a better grasp on the topic and was super efficient from a technical standpoint, twas enough to earn him the W

06-28-2020, 04:05 AM	#1
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Art - Seems like you've finally shaken your rust off and have returned to form. I liked the direction you took it, a super technical approach and tied it to the topic. Was a nice verse and I liked the idea of the "darkest ideas illuminating the darkness" that's just poetry in motion. Scar - I liked your verse man and I loved the imagery throughout, you painted a marvelous scene and it was like art jumping off of the canvas. It popped! But i think you lost direction storywise? You definitely caught my attention much more than your opponent's verse but I was just lost at the subject matter. Good verse man but I agree we've seen you do much better! V - Artifice I think he had a better grasp on the topic and was super efficient from a technical standpoint, twas enough to earn him the W