CONTENDERS: MMLP (4-2) vs Johnny 6 feet (3-1) JOHNNY WINS

symetrik · 06-27-2020, 12:08 AM

Johnny - great flow most of the way through, but it's rote xD all good. great connection to topic, great story - I love riddles so was hype to see this.

also for this line:
Many contestants sought an audience to answer the Regent
Thirsty for sweet victory but tasted bitter; defeated

I stopped reading for like 30 seconds just to nod at that rhyming word choice.

MMLP - good flow, tiny bit disjointed for me in a few places, but great build up of suspense to the inevitable. didn't hit the topic for me. if I'm not mistaken was a no-show? if not it felt like it, but if so, thanks for showing! :D

mvgt - Johnny

06-27-2020, 12:08 AM	#7
symetrik Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 709 Battle Record: 5-7 Rep Power: 12429299	Johnny - great flow most of the way through, but it's rote xD all good. great connection to topic, great story - I love riddles so was hype to see this. also for this line: Many contestants sought an audience to answer the Regent Thirsty for sweet victory but tasted bitter; defeated I stopped reading for like 30 seconds just to nod at that rhyming word choice. MMLP - good flow, tiny bit disjointed for me in a few places, but great build up of suspense to the inevitable. didn't hit the topic for me. if I'm not mistaken was a no-show? if not it felt like it, but if so, thanks for showing! :D mvgt - Johnny