Week 8: Packed Graves (1-0) vs. Enbombz (1-0) - ENBOMB WINS

Resin M-I-C · 05-27-2020, 06:54 PM

bomb was a lil too simple but ok
cluster was good
3rd straight nameplay, not feelin this one
mbk was ehh, statement ish
cans/shelter lines been done alot before but it’a still ok
lol sour worms was corny, but i fucked with it
nah wasnt feelin rut
closer was ok

vs

childplay worked with the quote, cool
defiant line was more of a statement
sheep line was nice, coulda been real heavy with some nasty wording
grave tombstone was too simple
snowpiercer was a bannnger
amazin concept coulda been nice, wording issues
engraves was aight
closer was decent

enjoyed the read, both got some solid concepts.. came down to how many more lines i liked and i think enbombz had 2 of the best 3 lines in here

v bomb

Wanderer · 05-28-2020, 02:38 AM

PG

Cluster bomb was nice
Bomb shelter I fucked with, although simple
Sour worms was dope

The rest either average / not feeling

Vs

Bombz

Childhood birthdays had potential, it was nearly there
Defiant, the idea I fuck with but ‘stop it don’t lie’ / ‘lost to him twice’ bit of a stretch in rhyming for me
Snowpiercer is dope

Fuck. Close one. Could go either way imo. Both had some decent lines. I felt Bombz kinda had better ideas in places... less name-plays for example.. however, his misses were worse (really wasn’t feeling sheep or tombstone) while PG was a little more consistent so that’s where I’m leaning.

Vote Packed Graves

05-27-2020, 06:54 PM	#1
Resin M-I-C Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 734 Battle Record: 33-9 Champed - 1-2 Punch Onslaught II - Tag Team Tournament V - 1-2 Punch Season III - Netcees SOL - Battle Arena - SOL Season I - NBL Season XIV - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 8150231	bomb was a lil too simple but ok cluster was good 3rd straight nameplay, not feelin this one mbk was ehh, statement ish cans/shelter lines been done alot before but it’a still ok lol sour worms was corny, but i fucked with it nah wasnt feelin rut closer was ok vs childplay worked with the quote, cool defiant line was more of a statement sheep line was nice, coulda been real heavy with some nasty wording grave tombstone was too simple snowpiercer was a bannnger amazin concept coulda been nice, wording issues engraves was aight closer was decent enjoyed the read, both got some solid concepts.. came down to how many more lines i liked and i think enbombz had 2 of the best 3 lines in here v bomb __________________ C. O. B.

05-28-2020, 02:38 AM	#2
Wanderer Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: England Posts: 589 Battle Record: 24-33 Champed - NPL Roast Rep Power: 7457541	PG Cluster bomb was nice Bomb shelter I fucked with, although simple Sour worms was dope The rest either average / not feeling Vs Bombz Childhood birthdays had potential, it was nearly there Defiant, the idea I fuck with but ‘stop it don’t lie’ / ‘lost to him twice’ bit of a stretch in rhyming for me Snowpiercer is dope Fuck. Close one. Could go either way imo. Both had some decent lines. I felt Bombz kinda had better ideas in places... less name-plays for example.. however, his misses were worse (really wasn’t feeling sheep or tombstone) while PG was a little more consistent so that’s where I’m leaning. Vote Packed Graves