Week 7: Snitchin is gangsta (1-0) vs. Zuchiefiasco (1-0) - Zuch wins

[Blue Bayou]

NBL Season XIV

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@Snitchin is gangsta
@Zuchiefiasco

[UPN Zuch]

Max? I can drop whenever.

[White LGI]

Originally Posted by Zuchiefiasco

Max? I can drop whenever.

I'll do max...

If I don't drop today I'll drop tomorrow at latest

[UPN Zuch]

Originally Posted by Snitching is gangsta

I'll do max...

If I don't drop today I'll drop tomorrow at latest

Sounds good, homie.

[UPN Zuch]

I’ll bring that heroin flow to prove that I’m lethal
Talent? You must have OD’d because you ain’t moving the needle
Felonious with the stick and always pack the dopest phrases
And if that brain is where you house your concepts, I don’t need to do this home invasion
I’m out for blood, guts and removing spleens
I’ll put your plasma all over the wall like I’m hanging a new TV
Voters will SEE your words are not as raw as mine
Although you may have a window of opportunity, if you can somehow draw the blind
See the ruger then I swoop and pull it
The Blue Steel will put this fruit in a blender, but I ain’t using NutriBullets
Had your girl over, we fucked and split like fifty beers
It was almost Toxic the way I Fed ‘er lines like Britney Spears
I’m raising the bar, high-speed at 5G
Your girl is at the bar, getting fucked high-speed by 5 G’s
Your lines blow and they’ve been tired
My lines ARE blow, they’ll leave you dead on your friends couch like Len Bias
You require surgery, schemes are worse than a child’s
When I told You to doctor your verse, I meant Kevorkian style
Believe I’m bringing the pound through
Muzzle the tip and put the vape to your dome just don’t call it a crown Juul

[White LGI]

I got a old dusty ratchet that don't mind randomly blowing on command
ain't spitting a gunbar...I'm talking bout that ugly bitch wit your ring on her hand
You been boring, dull bitch... wondering why you never mentioned in list
Ive known this bitch 20 years and he aint did a fucking thing worth a personal diss
Lame verses, everything you ink is square..you past a nerd
I keep shooters..I'll put $ on your Top like a cash app Alert
never accomplished shit...giving it one last try..knowing you'll fail in advance...
Went back 20 years...found no highlights..why tha fuck you need a last dance?
You was born pussy, stop fronting, you ain't trying to tussle
Watch snitch put a rappers brains on the pavement.. Nipsey Hussle
I got firearms of all sizes...I use the cannons to dead ops
So when I pull out the big one, I'll put 5 to ya chest like Redd Foxx
remember ya past, stop lying about accomplishments chasing clout
We got a better chance of finding facts in rants by Ouch
You talk that gangsta shit, but proof of ya tough talks lacking
Zuch got more fairytale's in raps than Sinacogs Dragons
Epstien didn't kill himself, just another one of zuchies unproven agendas
But he also making false claims of past text fame that nobody remembers

[Blue Bayou]

OPEN FOR VOTES

SIG has elected to only post 18

[Pharaohs Army]

Originally Posted by Zuchiefiasco

I’ll bring that heroin flow to prove that I’m lethal
Talent? You must have OD’d because you ain’t moving the needle
Decent
Felonious with the stick and always pack the dopest phrases
And if that brain is where you house your concepts, I don’t need to do this home invasion
Okay
I’m out for blood, guts and removing spleens
I’ll put your plasma all over the wall like I’m hanging a new TV
removing spleens/new TV looks okay but doesn't sound great aloud
Voters will SEE your words are not as raw as mine
Although you may have a window of opportunity, if you can somehow draw the blind
kind of corny but okay
See the ruger then I swoop and pull it
The Blue Steel will put this fruit in a blender, but I ain’t using NutriBullets
Okay
Had your girl over, we fucked and split like fifty beers
It was almost Toxic the way I Fed ‘er lines like Britney Spears
50's a big number for the sake of rhyme?
I’m raising the bar, high-speed at 5G
Your girl is at the bar, getting fucked high-speed by 5 G’s
Same words, meh
Your lines blow and they’ve been tired
My lines ARE blow, they’ll leave you dead on your friends couch like Len Bias
Good one. I like it
You require surgery, schemes are worse than a child’s
When I told You to doctor your verse, I meant Kevorkian style
Okay
Believe I’m bringing the pound through
Muzzle the tip and put the vape to your dome just don’t call it a crown Juul
Good closer

Originally Posted by Snitching is gangsta

I got a old dusty ratchet that don't mind randomly blowing on command
ain't spitting a gunbar...I'm talking bout that ugly bitch wit your ring on her hand
I think this opener is the LOTB
You been boring, dull bitch... wondering why you never mentioned in list
Ive known this bitch 20 years and he aint did a fucking thing worth a personal diss
Meh
Lame verses, everything you ink is square..you past a nerd
I keep shooters..I'll put $ on your Top like a cash app Alert
Okay
never accomplished shit...giving it one last try..knowing you'll fail in advance...
Went back 20 years...found no highlights..why tha fuck you need a last dance?
Meh. Last Dance reference. Okay
You was born pussy, stop fronting, you ain't trying to tussle
Watch snitch put a rappers brains on the pavement.. Nipsey Hussle
Your setups seem repetitive. Born pussy. Been boring. Lame verses.
I got firearms of all sizes...I use the cannons to dead ops
So when I pull out the big one, I'll put 5 to ya chest like Redd Foxx
Googled it
remember ya past, stop lying about accomplishments chasing clout
We got a better chance of finding facts in rants by Ouch
Discussion reference. Okay
You talk that gangsta shit, but proof of ya tough talks lacking
Zuch got more fairytale's in raps than Sinacogs Dragons
Lame
Epstien didn't kill himself, just another one of zuchies unproven agendas
But he also making false claims of past text fame that nobody remembers
Sig line. Meh. Okay

I've got this as a close battle.
I think Zuchie's Len Bias and Juul lines are just enough to edge Snitch's good opener.

I'll go Zuchie

[evaD]

Zuch
Move the needle
Plasma tv
5G bar got a laugh
Juul

Snitching
Opener was dope
Cash app

Overall Zuchie had more highlights and everything was worded better but Snitching’s opener was fire

Vote - Zuch

[Mac]

I’ll bring that heroin flow to prove that I’m lethal
Talent? You must have OD’d because you ain’t moving the needle
dope

Felonious with the stick and always pack the dopest phrases
And if that brain is where you house your concepts, I don’t need to do this home invasion
okish

I’m out for blood, guts and removing spleens
I’ll put your plasma all over the wall like I’m hanging a new TV
decent i like the wp

Voters will SEE your words are not as raw as mine
Although you may have a window of opportunity, if you can somehow draw the blind
meh

See the ruger then I swoop and pull it
The Blue Steel will put this fruit in a blender, but I ain’t using NutriBullets
not getting this

Had your girl over, we fucked and split like fifty beers
It was almost Toxic the way I Fed ‘er lines like Britney Spears
meh

I’m raising the bar, high-speed at 5G
Your girl is at the bar, getting fucked high-speed by 5 G’s
haha funny a bit simplistic

Your lines blow and they’ve been tired
My lines ARE blow, they’ll leave you dead on your friends couch like Len Bias
ok

You require surgery, schemes are worse than a child’s
When I told You to doctor your verse, I meant Kevorkian style
eerr

Believe I’m bringing the pound through
Muzzle the tip and put the vape to your dome just don’t call it a crown Juul
good good

v.

I got a old dusty ratchet that don't mind randomly blowing on command
ain't spitting a gunbar...I'm talking bout that ugly bitch wit your ring on her hand
fire

You been boring, dull bitch... wondering why you never mentioned in list
Ive known this bitch 20 years and he aint did a fucking thing worth a personal diss
nah

Lame verses, everything you ink is square..you past a nerd
I keep shooters..I'll put $ on your Top like a cash app Alert
okk

never accomplished shit...giving it one last try..knowing you'll fail in advance...
Went back 20 years...found no highlights..why tha fuck you need a last dance?
not getting this, is it related to the other 20 yrs line?

You was born pussy, stop fronting, you ain't trying to tussle
Watch snitch put a rappers brains on the pavement.. Nipsey Hussle
ok

I got firearms of all sizes...I use the cannons to dead ops
So when I pull out the big one, I'll put 5 to ya chest like Redd Foxx
simple

remember ya past, stop lying about accomplishments chasing clout
We got a better chance of finding facts in rants by Ouch
sounds like a diss to ouch

You talk that gangsta shit, but proof of ya tough talks lacking
Zuch got more fairytale's in raps than Sinacogs Dragons
fuck sinacog

Epstien didn't kill himself, just another one of zuchies unproven agendas
But he also making false claims of past text fame that nobody remembers
epstein bar, could have been worded better

I'm going with zush in this one, more consistency and overall a better verse
v/Zuchifiasco

[Answer]

I’ll bring that heroin flow to prove that I’m lethal
Talent? You must have OD’d because you ain’t moving the needle

Concept isnt the freshest thing in the world and the angle could be more unique, but this is decent

Felonious with the stick and always pack the dopest phrases
And if that brain is where you house your concepts, I don’t need to do this home invasion

Kinda funny, i like the general concept but in actuality this bar doesn't have much of a tangible meaning

I’m out for blood, guts and removing spleens
I’ll put your plasma all over the wall like I’m hanging a new TV

I like this

Voters will SEE your words are not as raw as mine
Although you may have a window of opportunity, if you can somehow draw the blind

cool concept and it's tied together well

See the ruger then I swoop and pull it
The Blue Steel will put this fruit in a blender, but I ain’t using NutriBullets

I think you could've omitted the word "blue" here, otherwise this is ok but the angle could be more creative

Had your girl over, we fucked and split like fifty beers
It was almost Toxic the way I Fed ‘er lines like Britney Spears

Nah this is a miss for me, old concept thats been done and doesnt belong in this decade

I’m raising the bar, high-speed at 5G
Your girl is at the bar, getting fucked high-speed by 5 G’s

This concept's been done before but the high speed part kinda made me lol, i think the general idea could've been executed better

Your lines blow and they’ve been tired
My lines ARE blow, they’ll leave you dead on your friends couch like Len Bias

Nah everything is this too literal except the coke reference which is played

You require surgery, schemes are worse than a child’s
When I told You to doctor your verse, I meant Kevorkian style

this is decent

Believe I’m bringing the pound through
Muzzle the tip and put the vape to your dome just don’t call it a crown Juul

Juul/jewel was a fresh idea but Ive never known anyone to refer to any part of a firearm as a vape so this execution is a miss for me




I got a old dusty ratchet that don't mind randomly blowing on command
ain't spitting a gunbar...I'm talking bout that ugly bitch wit your ring on her hand

This is a bit long-winded for a punchline but execution is solid and it's kinda funny

You been boring, dull bitch... wondering why you never mentioned in list
Ive known this bitch 20 years and he aint did a fucking thing worth a personal diss

too statement-like for me, not really feeling this

Lame verses, everything you ink is square..you past a nerd
I keep shooters..I'll put $ on your Top like a cash app Alert

I like the concept, not really feeling the execution here

never accomplished shit...giving it one last try..knowing you'll fail in advance...
Went back 20 years...found no highlights..why tha fuck you need a last dance?

Nah, I think you could've done more with this by tying jordan or parts of the documentary into the angle. A bit lacking as is

You was born pussy, stop fronting, you ain't trying to tussle
Watch snitch put a rappers brains on the pavement.. Nipsey Hussle

Eh this is ok, Im usually not a huge fan of doing nameplays on yourself and I think this couldve been harder

I got firearms of all sizes...I use the cannons to dead ops
So when I pull out the big one, I'll put 5 to ya chest like Redd Foxx

I like this

remember ya past, stop lying about accomplishments chasing clout
We got a better chance of finding facts in rants by Ouch

Nah too statement-like and just not enough thought put into the bar

You talk that gangsta shit, but proof of ya tough talks lacking
Zuch got more fairytale's in raps than Sinacogs Dragons

lol kinda same comment as above except this bar was funny to me so it's more acceptable

Epstien didn't kill himself, just another one of zuchies unproven agendas
But he also making false claims of past text fame that nobody remembers

Nah I wasn't feeling this, could've closed harder



LOTB for me was Plasma followed by Redd Foxx. Snitch's opener was also solid but I think he had a few more misses than Zuch, while Zuch stayed overall more consistent

mvgt Zuch

[Wanderer]

Originally Posted by Zuchiefiasco

I’ll bring that heroin flow to prove that I’m lethal
Talent? You must have OD’d because you ain’t moving the needle
Ehh it’s ok
Felonious with the stick and always pack the dopest phrases
And if that brain is where you house your concepts, I don’t need to do this home invasion
I get it but it doesn’t hit for me... housing concepts = 0 so no/home invasion.. but how u gonna do a home invasion on his brain anyway?
I’m out for blood, guts and removing spleens
I’ll put your plasma all over the wall like I’m hanging a new TV
This reads well but is played to me n kinda simple
Voters will SEE your words are not as raw as mine
Although you may have a window of opportunity, if you can somehow draw the blind
This is cool
See the ruger then I swoop and pull it
The Blue Steel will put this fruit in a blender, but I ain’t using NutriBullets
Again, simple. It’s so so.
Had your girl over, we fucked and split like fifty beers
It was almost Toxic the way I Fed ‘er lines like Britney Spears
Kinda played
I’m raising the bar, high-speed at 5G
Your girl is at the bar, getting fucked high-speed by 5 G’s
Kinda funny but I don’t dig it
Your lines blow and they’ve been tired
My lines ARE blow, they’ll leave you dead on your friends couch like Len Bias
Nah
You require surgery, schemes are worse than a child’s
When I told You to doctor your verse, I meant Kevorkian style
It’s ok
Believe I’m bringing the pound through
Muzzle the tip and put the vape to your dome just don’t call it a crown Juul
Nah

Vs

Originally Posted by Snitching is gangsta

I got a old dusty ratchet that don't mind randomly blowing on command
ain't spitting a gunbar...I'm talking bout that ugly bitch wit your ring on her hand
Lol cool
You been boring, dull bitch... wondering why you never mentioned in list
Ive known this bitch 20 years and he aint did a fucking thing worth a personal diss
Ok
Lame verses, everything you ink is square..you past a nerd
I keep shooters..I'll put $ on your Top like a cash app Alert
Reads well, not overly feeling the punch
never accomplished shit...giving it one last try..knowing you'll fail in advance...
Went back 20 years...found no highlights..why tha fuck you need a last dance?
Nah
You was born pussy, stop fronting, you ain't trying to tussle
Watch snitch put a rappers brains on the pavement.. Nipsey Hussle
Ehh not really as ur using ur own name to come up with this simple punch
I got firearms of all sizes...I use the cannons to dead ops
So when I pull out the big one, I'll put 5 to ya chest like Redd Foxx
So so
remember ya past, stop lying about accomplishments chasing clout
We got a better chance of finding facts in rants by Ouch
Ok
You talk that gangsta shit, but proof of ya tough talks lacking
Zuch got more fairytale's in raps than Sinacogs Dragons
Nah
Epstien didn't kill himself, just another one of zuchies unproven agendas
But he also making false claims of past text fame that nobody remembers
Not hitting

I think this was lacklustre but the standouts for me were ‘doctor ur verse’ ‘draw the blind’ and ‘dusty old ratchet’ ‘personal diss’ from snitch. Was thinking i’d go against the grain here and vote snitch. Zuch’s verse just read too simple for me, even with the hits. Re-reading i’ve Got him taking it though for being a touch more consistent..

Vote - Zuch

[Coop]

Zuchiefiasco


I’ll bring that heroin flow to prove that I’m lethal
Talent? You must have OD’d because you ain’t moving the needle
Ok
Felonious with the stick and always pack the dopest phrases
And if that brain is where you house your concepts, I don’t need to do this home invasion
Thought you were going elsewhere with it.... Fell flat
I’m out for blood, guts and removing spleens
I’ll put your plasma all over the wall like I’m hanging a new TV
Weak diss
Voters will SEE your words are not as raw as mine
Although you may have a window of opportunity, if you can somehow draw the blind
Above avg filler
See the ruger then I swoop and pull it
The Blue Steel will put this fruit in a blender, but I ain’t using NutriBullets
Not a fan
Had your girl over, we fucked and split like fifty beers
It was almost Toxic the way I Fed ‘er lines like Britney Spears
Filler
I’m raising the bar, high-speed at 5G
Your girl is at the bar, getting fucked high-speed by 5 G’s
Lazy
Your lines blow and they’ve been tired
My lines ARE blow, they’ll leave you dead on your friends couch like Len Bias
Above avg filler
You require surgery, schemes are worse than a child’s
When I told You to doctor your verse, I meant Kevorkian style
Ok
Believe I’m bringing the pound through
Muzzle the tip and put the vape to your dome just don’t call it a crown Juul
Meh


Seems keyed. Had a few hits.

5/10




VS




Snitching is Gangsta



I got a old dusty ratchet that don't mind randomly blowing on command
ain't spitting a gunbar...I'm talking bout that ugly bitch wit your ring on her hand
Good
You been boring, dull bitch... wondering why you never mentioned in list
Ive known this bitch 20 years and he aint did a fucking thing worth a personal diss
Meh
Lame verses, everything you ink is square..you past a nerd
I keep shooters..I'll put $ on your Top like a cash app Alert
Not a diss
never accomplished shit...giving it one last try..knowing you'll fail in advance...
Went back 20 years...found no highlights..why tha fuck you need a last dance?
Was with it until the ending
You was born pussy, stop fronting, you ain't trying to tussle
Watch snitch put a rappers brains on the pavement.. Nipsey Hussle
All bars that end like this are misses
I got firearms of all sizes...I use the cannons to dead ops
So when I pull out the big one, I'll put 5 to ya chest like Redd Foxx
Filler
remember ya past, stop lying about accomplishments chasing clout
We got a better chance of finding facts in rants by Ouch
Doesn't resonate, but too statementish even if it did
You talk that gangsta shit, but proof of ya tough talks lacking
Zuch got more fairytale's in raps than Sinacogs Dragons
Filler
Epstien didn't kill himself, just another one of zuchies unproven agendas
But he also making false claims of past text fame that nobody remembers
Not feelin it, bland

Your opener was good, then it went downhill from there.

3/10


Snitch had LOTB, Zuch had more actual hits. If snitch added another bar on the level of the ratchet bar, he might've took this. Not a battle that needed to go max.


Vote: Zuchiefiasco

[Victor.]

Zuch opener was cool but as the verse went on it was very 03 with tons of idioms


It showed its age fast


My son snitching is gangster is straight basura lmao


Vote zuch