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K I N G
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this was close
FGR had some good ideas, and some i've never even heard before...is stitching your absence a phrase? I might be out of the loop, idk. Still a cool verse, liked the opener and the bullets miss In line. those were doooope. Inno overall read more nonchalant, which works if the concepts are there, but they weren't really. I didn't get the raptors line either, at best its either forced wordplay or just a throwaway line. opener was cool, sloth line was funny, thats about it. V - FGR |
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