Week 6 Championship Match: Neighbor (4-0) vs. Letterman (4-1) - NEIGH WINS

Orc · 05-17-2020, 12:15 PM

Mag was hard to make fresh although the it was a current event flip
Telegraph was nice, tie in were perfect
Thought the gunnar optics was a miss
Champion material was a cool name flip
Informal was cool wp. Personal letter good way to tie it in
Calligraphy was a nice concept. Feels a bit redundant now tho because of 3 letter name plays in a row. Overdoing it man
Burns line LOTB DONNNN DEMARCOOO BANG BANG
The closer was a little convoluted for me bro but I respect the ties and creativity

Vs

Human verification was a nice concept
Sweeper line was fire although you wouldn’t bang on a neighbours roof if it was upstairs? Technicality tho and could have been fixed so I’ll leave it be
Funnel ok wp
The Bball like was nice
Ixnay was a little bit corny for my taste man. The wp itself
Fucked up cash was worded well but didn’t sting or attack him man
Obsolete a bit of a stretch imo
The nasal spray I’ve seen before so didn’t hit

I got Neighbor here but it’s very close imo

Good read fellas some nice stuff

05-17-2020, 12:15 PM	#1
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,163 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899393	Mag was hard to make fresh although the it was a current event flip Telegraph was nice, tie in were perfect Thought the gunnar optics was a miss Champion material was a cool name flip Informal was cool wp. Personal letter good way to tie it in Calligraphy was a nice concept. Feels a bit redundant now tho because of 3 letter name plays in a row. Overdoing it man Burns line LOTB DONNNN DEMARCOOO BANG BANG The closer was a little convoluted for me bro but I respect the ties and creativity Vs Human verification was a nice concept Sweeper line was fire although you wouldn’t bang on a neighbours roof if it was upstairs? Technicality tho and could have been fixed so I’ll leave it be Funnel ok wp The Bball like was nice Ixnay was a little bit corny for my taste man. The wp itself Fucked up cash was worded well but didn’t sting or attack him man Obsolete a bit of a stretch imo The nasal spray I’ve seen before so didn’t hit I got Neighbor here but it’s very close imo Good read fellas some nice stuff