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05-11-2020, 05:40 PM
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Week 6: FGR (3-2) vs. Inno (3-2) - FGR WINS
NBL Season XIV Rules Due Dates: • Verses are due FRIDAY by 11:59 PM PST. • Voting ends MONDAY ideally • Battles that lack votes may close later. • One sided battles may get closed early. • Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ • To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance Line Limit: • Min. = 10 lines • Max. = 20 lines • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. Voting: • I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls. General Rules: • 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. • Feeding = DQ. • Recycling = DQ. • Biting = DQ. • No freeposting, swaying or bitching. • Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will disqualified. • A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. • If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a verse. • Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. • If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount. @FGR @Inno
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05-11-2020, 08:45 PM
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05-12-2020, 09:26 AM
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05-15-2020, 10:12 PM
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My bad let me get an ext plz
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05-15-2020, 11:49 PM
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05-16-2020, 05:42 PM
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@Inno
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I found this quote and laughed. Dude your writtens are the worse So much of your rhymes are ass, we're getting moon'd with every verse Your words are outdated... but I guess posting old shit is the new norm Insulate with his concepts when I punch him thru a wall he'll keep the house warm Some say im inhuman! A cruel savage with the switchblade or shotty Your also considered inhuming ......when I begin that process with your lifeless body Imma perfect shot w/ the gun bro. When I pull it out .....his future becomes grim Trust me these bullets won't miss In, that's just how his family's gonna report him Shotgun blast to the GUT bitch! The 12 gauge leave you dead on your lawn Doctors won't bother stitching your absence, that whole fucking section will be gone Last edited by FGR; 05-16-2020 at 05:45 PM. |
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05-16-2020, 06:28 PM
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No need for the tough talk, I’m a as real as they come niggah ya bore me
First to scream “they sleepin on me”... only cuz yah bars pillow soft they get nothing but snores G... Aim at ur chest Yah numbers up, 2 in the head now yah dead faster Then hang ur body on display only time they’ll say FGRS jersey hung from the raptors... Pussy this shit is no joke, come at you with punches until I see red Let’s be honest ur no match in the 1-2’s that’s all fact! Last time it only took 1, this time eat ten... Saw your vid, disgusting another fat nerd rapping what are the odds????? And the basement is fitting, cuz you literally look like a 30 year old version of sloth... Yo this battle is over, tbh from the first shot it was all grim But IF YOU THINK ABOUT IT! Technically it really took a miracle for me to win! |
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05-17-2020, 10:20 AM
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05-17-2020, 10:36 AM
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I found this quote and laughed. Dude your writtens are the worse
So much of your rhymes are ass, we're getting moon'd with every verse funny, i think the wording could've been a little more effective but ok opener Your words are outdated... but I guess posting old shit is the new norm Insulate with his concepts when I punch him thru a wall he'll keep the house warm I like the overall idea, execution is decent. Falls a little short of a haymaker for me but solid punch Some say im inhuman! A cruel savage with the switchblade or shotty Your also considered inhuming ......when I begin that process with your lifeless body ok concept, wordplay is passable - I think you might've been able to do a little more with it but cool Imma perfect shot w/ the gun bro. When I pull it out .....his future becomes grim Trust me these bullets won't miss In, that's just how his family's gonna report him Nah, I think naturally you would put a pause in "bullets wont Miss In" that makes this a little clunky Shotgun blast to the GUT bitch! The 12 gauge leave you dead on your lawn Doctors won't bother stitching your absence, that whole fucking section will be gone I like the idea, the execution is solid. Decent closer overall No need for the tough talk, I’m a as real as they come niggah ya bore me First to scream “they sleepin on me”... only cuz yah bars pillow soft they get nothing but snores G... I've seen the general idea done quite a few times, so its a miss for me Aim at ur chest Yah numbers up, 2 in the head now yah dead faster Then hang ur body on display only time they’ll say FGRS jersey hung from the raptors... Raptors/rafters? I don't know, to be honest I think this one went over my head Pussy this shit is no joke, come at you with punches until I see red Let’s be honest ur no match in the 1-2’s that’s all fact! Last time it only took 1, this time eat ten... ok Saw your vid, disgusting another fat nerd rapping what are the odds????? And the basement is fitting, cuz you literally look like a 30 year old version of sloth... this is funny, might land harder in a pic battle Yo this battle is over, tbh from the first shot it was all grim But IF YOU THINK ABOUT IT! Technically it really took a miracle for me to win! Nah, I think this general idea has been done too many times overall I think FGR just had better execution and fresher concepts here v/ FGR |
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05-17-2020, 12:56 PM
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Inno I expected more....I liked the sloth love ne and the closer
Fgr was more complete...the opener was nice....I liked the new norm line Vote fgr |
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05-17-2020, 02:03 PM
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I found this quote and laughed. Dude your writtens are the worse
So much of your rhymes are ass, we're getting moon'd with every verse Your words are outdated... but I guess posting old shit is the new norm Insulate with his concepts when I punch him thru a wall he'll keep the house warm Shotgun blast to the GUT bitch! The 12 gauge leave you dead on your lawn Doctors won't bother stitching your absence, that whole fucking section will be gone vs. Saw your vid, disgusting another fat nerd rapping what are the odds????? And the basement is fitting, cuz you literally look like a 30 year old version of sloth... nice stuff coming from miracle like always, the ass line was really funny. Miracle wps are played, I liked the sloth line but IDK how miracle looks like, 1-2 line fell a bit statement-ish v/ miracle |
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05-18-2020, 06:32 AM
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this was close
FGR had some good ideas, and some i've never even heard before...is stitching your absence a phrase? I might be out of the loop, idk. Still a cool verse, liked the opener and the bullets miss In line. those were doooope. Inno overall read more nonchalant, which works if the concepts are there, but they weren't really. I didn't get the raptors line either, at best its either forced wordplay or just a throwaway line. opener was cool, sloth line was funny, thats about it. V - FGR |
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05-18-2020, 10:14 AM
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5-0 fgr wins
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