WEEK 7: NoetiC vs Blue Bayou BB WINS

Johnny 6 feet · 05-10-2020, 10:29 AM

Noetic- All hail the holy buffalo! This felt like you were speaking to the reader directly about the nature and the struggle of being a writer. If this is you speaking on a personal level I can relate, especially about the curse of writer's block. You linked the topic to the picture clearly and backed it up with well worded vocab. Felt there was a few filler lines here and there, but the religious theme running through it was a fresh idea that more than compensated.

Blue Bayou- I liked this. Another piece which read as if you were speaking to the reader directly. You kept your sense of rhythm from start to finish without a slip, and the compound rhymes never seemed forced. You painted a clear picture in your subject choice of memory, and relating that to a philosophy about life in general was uplifting and inspired. Good to see a positive piece in a topical league where we often see dark (but great) themed verses.

Vote- Blue

05-10-2020, 10:29 AM	#11
Johnny 6 feet Storyteller Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 446 Battle Record: 8-4 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League Rep Power: 5558447	Noetic- All hail the holy buffalo! This felt like you were speaking to the reader directly about the nature and the struggle of being a writer. If this is you speaking on a personal level I can relate, especially about the curse of writer's block. You linked the topic to the picture clearly and backed it up with well worded vocab. Felt there was a few filler lines here and there, but the religious theme running through it was a fresh idea that more than compensated. Blue Bayou- I liked this. Another piece which read as if you were speaking to the reader directly. You kept your sense of rhythm from start to finish without a slip, and the compound rhymes never seemed forced. You painted a clear picture in your subject choice of memory, and relating that to a philosophy about life in general was uplifting and inspired. Good to see a positive piece in a topical league where we often see dark (but great) themed verses. Vote- Blue