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Old 05-05-2020, 04:33 PM   #3
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It was funny. I love the bravado. You got off a little bit of everything with this one, but that flow was crazy. I like your word choice to, mixing it up with a bit of vocab and even common terms to appeal to a broader audience

ā€œI'll fuck your bitch up without really needin' the sex
Just feelin' the breasts, peelin' the flesh
Kneelin' on down expectin' me in her neck
I'm not rushin' it's obvious, or I'd be screamin' in Czech
Punched in the face 'til it's gleamin' & wet, blood streamin' in jets
Fuel injection, cruel & reckless
Thugs swingin' the techs
'Til I come outta the dark & watch them fleein' all stressed
As I light up this blunt, & get the full effect of the weed I ā€œ I fucks with it
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