Kings.

Johnny 6 feet · 05-05-2020, 10:28 AM

Nice. Crazy vocab laced with strong imagery had held my attention from start to finish:

"Be they disguised as apathy or failed repentance’s. Observe: my pedigrees tremendousness.
This is the sort of simpleness your supposed synthesis of the differences I use when I go Limitless."

Over 9000 then? Lol. This just rolled off the tongue; a mix of philosophical musing and straight braggodociousness that balanced out nicely. I liked the superpower-esque sign off as well. It was a good closer to put the rest of the piece in context.

Keep posting. Please rtf.

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05-05-2020, 10:28 AM	#2
Johnny 6 feet Storyteller Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 446 Battle Record: 8-4 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League Rep Power: 5558447	Nice. Crazy vocab laced with strong imagery had held my attention from start to finish: "Be they disguised as apathy or failed repentance’s. Observe: my pedigrees tremendousness. This is the sort of simpleness your supposed synthesis of the differences I use when I go Limitless." Over 9000 then? Lol. This just rolled off the tongue; a mix of philosophical musing and straight braggodociousness that balanced out nicely. I liked the superpower-esque sign off as well. It was a good closer to put the rest of the piece in context. Keep posting. Please rtf. -6