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05-04-2020, 07:26 PM
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Braggdocious stuff. Kinda leaned a little hard on the Mexican punchlines though. Rhythm wise it read well, the compounds were solid but not excessive. It's hard to judge a diss verse when I'm unfamiliar with the guy it's about. All I know from this is he's Mexican, possibly Catholic and those bars of his you quoted were weak sauce.
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