Week 4: SMaSh (1-1) vs. FGR (1-2) - FGR WINS

NoetiC · 05-03-2020, 07:18 PM

FGR:

You don't come off as scary. Im seeing no tough guy connection
If smash is alarming to me.. he's blowing a rape whistle n pointing in my direction

cool

Your family lives in shambles. Poor... disgusting..covered in bodily fuild
His house is such a hole in the wall, for 30 bucks his bitch will suck you thru it

dope

not a fan of lines that talk about guns or how hard someone is, because its the internet and most of these lines just come across as filler to me

smash:

One uppercut and this dude rocked....visually it'll be a cool shot
So I'll be creative and treat it like facebook and leave f Inna blue box

ok

your flow is unnatural to me, those long lines seemed to drag on a bit too long to keep the flow intact

vote FRG for better flow and more creativity, i didnt see much stand out to me from smash's verse

05-03-2020, 07:18 PM	#10
NoetiC Hesitation is Defeat Join Date: Apr 2020 Posts: 103 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 0	FGR: You don't come off as scary. Im seeing no tough guy connection If smash is alarming to me.. he's blowing a rape whistle n pointing in my direction cool Your family lives in shambles. Poor... disgusting..covered in bodily fuild His house is such a hole in the wall, for 30 bucks his bitch will suck you thru it dope not a fan of lines that talk about guns or how hard someone is, because its the internet and most of these lines just come across as filler to me smash: One uppercut and this dude rocked....visually it'll be a cool shot So I'll be creative and treat it like facebook and leave f Inna blue box ok your flow is unnatural to me, those long lines seemed to drag on a bit too long to keep the flow intact vote FRG for better flow and more creativity, i didnt see much stand out to me from smash's verse