WEEK 6 Contenders: Bodey vs Adverse 5-0 BODEY WINS

Candy · 05-03-2020, 02:23 AM

adverse:

pretty dope i liked the story very well structured and the rhyme structure was pretty tight.. it made it all flow pretty smoothly.. i think your style was pretty cool it sorted of played off each character like a tower of jinga and simple back and forth and the description get progessing in the story with it nicely.. all in all pretty cool

bodey:

super dope the whole tale about the cub scoutts was dope.. but your character development was huge some how you outshined adverse and his was deep.. but i think what made this verse was your story telling the way you paced and described the direction of the story was hot.. your rhyme scheme was tight to..

vote = bodey

i think he just took it with a much smoother story.. but it was def very close..

05-03-2020, 02:23 AM	#9
Candy Sell Her Join Date: Feb 2018 Posts: 1,075 Battle Record: 1-3 Rep Power: 8518432	adverse: pretty dope i liked the story very well structured and the rhyme structure was pretty tight.. it made it all flow pretty smoothly.. i think your style was pretty cool it sorted of played off each character like a tower of jinga and simple back and forth and the description get progessing in the story with it nicely.. all in all pretty cool bodey: super dope the whole tale about the cub scoutts was dope.. but your character development was huge some how you outshined adverse and his was deep.. but i think what made this verse was your story telling the way you paced and described the direction of the story was hot.. your rhyme scheme was tight to.. vote = bodey i think he just took it with a much smoother story.. but it was def very close.. __________________ curious más curioso y más curioso