Week 5: Sinacog vs Candy CANDY WINS

[Bodey]

Sinacog- i honestly cant tell at this point if you're trolling or you actually write like this. i couldnt even read it all because it's basically an insult to the craft. wish you'd take it more seriously because you may be shocked to discover what you're capable of when you actually try.

Candy- again, this seemed like a piece i'd read in the open mic cypher. a quick key, scattered with grammatical errors and awkward wording. like "death penalty approaching closer then close" like come on man, you can do better than that. it just seemed lazy, thrown together on the spot and posted without any effort to edit first. and like Universe said, that's the problem with posting so early because it goes against you. this seemed more like a bullet list of ideas for what you were gonna write about more than it was a verse. you win by default here

v/ Candy