Week 3: Blue Bayou vs Universe (UNI WINS)

MMLP · 04-10-2020, 06:27 AM

Uni, I appreciate what you done here, i see it for its design, some lines seemed to drag a little n i guess u sacrificed the flow for content which isnt a crime but on preference stood out to me n made a little harder to get into. Otherwise its decent storytelling. Some ppl may see the link to picture as kinda a push but it's very creative. I've done pieces from the perspective of a puppet, a dog etc... but a fetus lool, its lil (even for me) stretchy but ain't mad at ya. Good read

Blue, dont think ive ever read a topical of yours so no idea what to expect.

Hahaha already I'm getting a battle vibe from it. No fucks given
SAG award killed me, lots of other shit was nice. Few LOLs in there
Battle arena it's a no contest, in the words of vinny mac.. its such good shit

Uni has to win the topical match though

04-10-2020, 06:27 AM	#8
MMLP Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 614 Battle Record: 15-16 Champed - Write Week 9 Rep Power: 9768091	Uni, I appreciate what you done here, i see it for its design, some lines seemed to drag a little n i guess u sacrificed the flow for content which isnt a crime but on preference stood out to me n made a little harder to get into. Otherwise its decent storytelling. Some ppl may see the link to picture as kinda a push but it's very creative. I've done pieces from the perspective of a puppet, a dog etc... but a fetus lool, its lil (even for me) stretchy but ain't mad at ya. Good read Blue, dont think ive ever read a topical of yours so no idea what to expect. Hahaha already I'm getting a battle vibe from it. No fucks given SAG award killed me, lots of other shit was nice. Few LOLs in there Battle arena it's a no contest, in the words of vinny mac.. its such good shit Uni has to win the topical match though