Week One: Barcotic vs. Incredible - BARC WINS

Adverse · 04-09-2020, 12:43 PM

Barc had a few good bars, specifically the first two, didn't really like stoned and isolate, good wordplays but just didn't feel like they were on par with the opening two bars, especially the opener.

Inc went too crazy on the "bar" wordplays, i think some of the good ones actually got lost in how many there were, gotta mix it up, just makes the verse kind of monotonous with that many referencez of the same kind. Did like the barbequed line, closer was alright.

Think Barc wins here easily even with a lackluster verse.

V/Barc

04-09-2020, 12:43 PM	#5
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Barc had a few good bars, specifically the first two, didn't really like stoned and isolate, good wordplays but just didn't feel like they were on par with the opening two bars, especially the opener. Inc went too crazy on the "bar" wordplays, i think some of the good ones actually got lost in how many there were, gotta mix it up, just makes the verse kind of monotonous with that many referencez of the same kind. Did like the barbequed line, closer was alright. Think Barc wins here easily even with a lackluster verse. V/Barc