Week One: Adverse vs. Letterman - LET WINS

[Blue Bayou]

NBL Season XIV

Rules

Due Dates:
• Verses are due Wednesday by 11:59 PM PST.
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@Adverse
@Letterman

[Adverse]

12 sound good to you? If so let's get it! Check!

[Adverse]

Edgar Allen Poe flow, the way i do him with that led will be tragic
You'd think he earned his credits at Kansas way i got the K on Letterman Jacket
Odds are you no-show, I'll be mad hyped if this dweeb even posts
Same energy as your girl when i give her this Dick...Hallorann like she just seen a ghost
You were wack in the Summer Classic just admit you're outmatched bitch
He'd probably pay Blue to make the book fair, if he could even afford shit from Scholastic
"Haha damn Ad you got jokes!" No he and his entire fam is broke
That's why i leave Letter ripped from the magazine and folded in a white sheet i ain't leaving a ransom note
You ain't reloading automatics, you ain't squeezin the gat hard
Last time this retard was feedin a llama he was screamin "tina you fat lard!"
I catch Letterman late at night like a rerun leave him bleedin without discussion
Kick in your door, mask off, your next guest needs no introduction

light work

[Letterman]

Just seeing this. I’m here

[Letterman]

Aka Dolla

Originally Posted by Adverse

12 sound good to you? If so let's get it! Check!

Shoulda just deleted ya post. Cuz there’s no way you’re winning this, man
Next time think b4 u Senate.. that‘s a check for nothing that rivals the new Stimulus plan
Ya fam don’t love you. They ignore calls, texts, & he’s blocked on skype
Face it, you’re unwanted Ad.. & that’s why they shut you out anytime you pop up on site
U love ya girl? I’ll burn the crib.. u seeing her die’s a big surprise
But we’ll find out how passionate he really is, as soon as that fire is in his eyes
I brought the shotgun if this thug wanna trip
& Adsense you want to go to war, I’ll make sure you get these bucks from the clip
You save up bars for shock value, tryna convince us that he’s sick
We’ve seen dollar store concepts, that’s the reason why we’re not buying that cheap shit
Wesson on me.. it’s one warning shot if I bring the Smith in to flare
I’m Triple H w/ the water bottle.. cuz before I get to the ring, imma just spit in the air

[Inno]

Adverse

Opener, seen a ghost, closer


Letterman

Opener, pop up on site, cheap shit.


Tbh I wasn’t feeling adverse verse as a whole. He had soem good lines, I think his opener was his best line but I’m sure that’s been used tons of times against letterman. Any way still a good punch. He stumbled with his wording on a lot of his lines which took away. Letterman was more compact and seemed to keep it more consistent than adverse. Honestly letter had a couple of lines I thought where dope, cheap shit, pop up on site I thought where clever as fuck. Good battle but I got letterman.


Letter

[FGR]

Letterman jacket I've seen done on him and it's wasn't one of the better ones
I thought the halloreen line was nice..but could have been worded better to pack alot more sting..I was feeling the wordplay tho..
Book fair didn't hit
Random was to wordy n stretched out
Llama was okish.. wasn't feeling the closer

Vs

Senate was cool opener..
Unwanted was good .. wasn't feeling fire in eyes
Cheap shit was alright.. the rest was ok

Vote Letterman ...I thought it was close as fuck but letter was slightly more consistent with his hits... N his misses weren't as bad.. not a bad battle at all tho

[Aero]

Adverse:

Cool verse... the ransome note line was ok could've been cleaned up... letterman next guest same thing.. rest was aight

Letterman:

unwanted ad was cool, fire in his eyes was cute, dollar line was coool.. the rest was aight.




Good battle fellas. BOTW so far for me..

MVGT Letterman.

[Barcotic]

Originally Posted by Adverse

Edgar Allen Poe flow, the way i do him with that led will be tragic
You'd think he earned his credits at Kansas way i got the K on Letterman Jacket
Nah, half the concept is played & the other half just wasn't good
Odds are you no-show, I'll be mad hyped if this dweeb even posts
Same energy as your girl when i give her this Dick...Hallorann like she just seen a ghost
Cool
You were wack in the Summer Classic just admit you're outmatched bitch
He'd probably pay Blue to make the book fair, if he could even afford shit from Scholastic
Ok
"Haha damn Ad you got jokes!" No he and his entire fam is broke
That's why i leave Letter ripped from the magazine and folded in a white sheet i ain't leaving a ransom note
Concept is crazy dope, but the punch was longwided af. Jab
You ain't reloading automatics, you ain't squeezin the gat hard
Last time this retard was feedin a llama he was screamin "tina you fat lard!"
Hell no
I catch Letterman late at night like a rerun leave him bleedin without discussion
Kick in your door, mask off, your next guest needs no introduction
No

1 good punch
2 jabs
3 misses

Originally Posted by Letterman

Shoulda just deleted ya post. Cuz there’s no way you’re winning this, man
Next time think b4 u Senate.. that‘s a check for nothing that rivals the new Stimulus plan
Wordy but not bad. Jab
Ya fam don’t love you. They ignore calls, texts, & he’s blocked on skype
Face it, you’re unwanted Ad.. & that’s why they shut you out anytime you pop up on site
Cool
U love ya girl? I’ll burn the crib.. u seeing her die’s a big surprise
But we’ll find out how passionate he really is, as soon as that fire is in his eyes
Nah, corny concept
I brought the shotgun if this thug wanna trip
& Adsense you want to go to war, I’ll make sure you get these bucks from the clip
Dece.
You save up bars for shock value, tryna convince us that he’s sick
We’ve seen dollar store concepts, that’s the reason why we’re not buying that cheap shit
Ok
Wesson on me.. it’s one warning shot if I bring the Smith in to flare
I’m Triple H w/ the water bottle.. cuz before I get to the ring, imma just spit in the air
This could have ben a banger w. better wording, but not bad as is

1 good punch
4 jabs
1 miss

[Saint]

Adverse: Hallorann, Ransom Note cool idea needed revisions in the wording. Letterman/guest too obv a concept, same as opener. Feeding a lama nah.

Letterman was more consistent here. Hit slightly harder bar for bar. Lots of decent hits, less misses. Unwanted Ad, opener.

Vote Letterman

[Blue Bayou]

Letterman wins