Can we re-instate OMNOMs?

[Universe]

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[Blue Bayou]

Originally Posted by Universe

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Ohhh the whole self nom angle huh

Distasteful

[Universe]

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

Ohhh the whole self nom angle huh

Distasteful

I'm responding to the hate in this thread mostly. All these dudes who say I suck couldn't write a better piece if they tried. Give them the rest of the year to attempt it, I don't care. They won't match what I did in just a couple days.

Facts are facts.

[Blue Bayou]

Originally Posted by Universe

I'm responding to the hate in this thread mostly. All these dudes who say I suck couldn't write a better piece if they tried. Give them the rest of the year to attempt it, I don't care. They won't match what I did in just a couple days.

Facts are facts.

Now this is the kindve self confident drip I can get behind

[Universe]

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

Now this is the kindve self confident drip I can get behind

Haha I actually hate being this guy. I do. But the amount of shit talkers on here is crazy. If the level of shit talking matched the level of the verses dropped I'd be okay with it. But it doesn't come close. Most of these guys are garbage lyrically, and they know it... hence why they shit talk lol.

There's literally only a handful of guys/girls? on here that I look forward to reading their stuff. The rest I read and critique out of pity lol.

But I'll leave it at that. This quarantine shit is messing with my head.

[Clutbuck]

Originally Posted by Universe

There's literally only a handful of guys/girls? on here that I look forward to reading their stuff. The rest I read and critique out of pity lol.

let’s hear you say it with your chest though

who do you enjoy and who do you pity?

[Universe]

Originally Posted by Clutbuck

let’s hear you say it with your chest though

who do you enjoy and who do you pity?

Open Mic - dead man & Adverse are my favorites right now.... no one else really stands out. I liked your verse in OM league but want to see more from you. MMLP is dope too.

Battles - Barcotic, Bayou... yeah.

Pity is the wrong word I'll admit... little harsh. I'll pass on listing names in that category for now. No need.

[Larkin]

Originally Posted by Universe

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I stopped reading after you rhymed "homage" with "on me".

[Universe]

Originally Posted by Larkin

I stopped reading after you rhymed "homage" with "on me".

No, you didn't. You just thought it was an original thing to say... (it isn't.) Plus, there's other ways to connect rhyme schemes together that doesn't necessarily involve the final one or two syllables of a line.

Please refer to my Beginner's Guide below (which you clearly need), for any further information.

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=142140

Thank you.

[Pharaohs Army]

Originally Posted by Universe

No, you didn't. You just thought it was an original thing to say... (it isn't.) Plus, there's other ways to connect rhyme schemes together that doesn't necessarily involve the final one or two syllables of a line.

Please refer to my Beginner's Guide below (which you clearly need), for any further information.

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=142140

Thank you.

Universe. I just wanna say: your verses are for the most part good. but your wordplay is corny as ffffffff Please refrain from it,


Using this thread to link multiple OM pieces. We got it. You're better than average. Maybe slow down on the wordplays.

[Universe]

Originally Posted by Pharaohs Army

Using this thread to link multiple OM pieces.

Who... me? Nah. That's not what I'm up to at all...

Larkin forever.

[Larkin]

Originally Posted by Universe

No, you didn't. You just thought it was an original thing to say... (it isn't.) Plus, there's other ways to connect rhyme schemes together that doesn't necessarily involve the final one or two syllables of a line.

Please refer to my Beginner's Guide below (which you clearly need), for any further information.

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=142140

Thank you.

Haha, you clearly thought they rhymed. Defence mode activated.

lol trying to claim you were using a different rhyme scheme exclusively for the first bar when your basic, boring, conversational, Dr Seuss two syllable rhyming style is identical in every verse you write. You could of at least claimed it was a regional accent or that English is your third language or something.

Either way, you shouldn't be anywhere near a HOF or OM nom. You've got a lot to improve on. Have a great day.