GWL WK 2: Exis vs MMLP (MMLP Wins)

Universe · 03-27-2020, 05:22 PM

Exis, good try but you got to dig a little deeper man. Everything about your verse just seemed surface and ho-hum. You need to get more creative if you want to succeed in this.

MMLP, another great showing this week. The picture was cool but making a topic out of it was tough. But I loved the whole Mortal Kombat angle. Maybe I'm partial because I'm a fan of the MK series but i thought this was a super creative way to take this. (Shoulda ended it all with a FATALITY though :p)

Vote - MMLP

03-27-2020, 05:22 PM	#4
Universe Everything's Connected Join Date: Nov 2017 Location: Niagara Falls, Canada Posts: 1,001 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League(2x) - GWL Picture challenge(2x) - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 10178706	Exis, good try but you got to dig a little deeper man. Everything about your verse just seemed surface and ho-hum. You need to get more creative if you want to succeed in this. MMLP, another great showing this week. The picture was cool but making a topic out of it was tough. But I loved the whole Mortal Kombat angle. Maybe I'm partial because I'm a fan of the MK series but i thought this was a super creative way to take this. (Shoulda ended it all with a FATALITY though :p) Vote - MMLP __________________ ..Passed the Present and Future..