THE OPEN MIC CYPHER

Adverse · 02-25-2020, 04:24 PM

Use this mic like a weapon to teach you writers a lesson
Praises due to the highest, but I'm slighted i don't like the attention
Ripper like a Salvatore, vampiric intentions like i am Stefan
Turning rappers to ghosts like Danny Fenton don't mess with your parents inventions
I am your father, like Vader, but I'm more on my Kylo Ren
When the knives are out I'm not convinced who i should side against
My every word looked at through a lens like it was written in bible print
I brought so many to their graves and I'm liable to snipe again..

Pharaohs Army · 02-26-2020, 02:02 AM

I've mixed all your similes into a nice bowl of soup. Slowly you become you. Now hold true.
Try the simplistic.
You said the sky was the limit. But I didn't get it.
I was too busy getting high at a picnic.
Though about frying some biscuits, but I couldn't risk it.
Don't confuse it. Necro has 1 good song but he's a quality producer.
Go on. Tell me all of the violent things that you'll do to me.
Usually, it looks like your just boasting, foolishly.
I know you inhabit this nation. But I don't know your exact situation.
All I can say was Obamacare was not perfect, but better than the status quo.
And Bernie says that all of the private insurance companies have to go.
Black republicans voting against their own interest.
Well, that became everyone's problem; Didn't it?

02-25-2020, 04:24 PM	#1
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Use this mic like a weapon to teach you writers a lesson Praises due to the highest, but I'm slighted i don't like the attention Ripper like a Salvatore, vampiric intentions like i am Stefan Turning rappers to ghosts like Danny Fenton don't mess with your parents inventions I am your father, like Vader, but I'm more on my Kylo Ren When the knives are out I'm not convinced who i should side against My every word looked at through a lens like it was written in bible print I brought so many to their graves and I'm liable to snipe again..

02-26-2020, 02:02 AM	#2
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	I've mixed all your similes into a nice bowl of soup. Slowly you become you. Now hold true. Try the simplistic. You said the sky was the limit. But I didn't get it. I was too busy getting high at a picnic. Though about frying some biscuits, but I couldn't risk it. Don't confuse it. Necro has 1 good song but he's a quality producer. Go on. Tell me all of the violent things that you'll do to me. Usually, it looks like your just boasting, foolishly. I know you inhabit this nation. But I don't know your exact situation. All I can say was Obamacare was not perfect, but better than the status quo. And Bernie says that all of the private insurance companies have to go. Black republicans voting against their own interest. Well, that became everyone's problem; Didn't it?