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Banned
Join Date: Aug 2014
Posts: 2,956
Battle Record: 6 - 14
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Ho hum; I've seen better. You can't hack it.
Your verse is perfectly constructed but you can't rap it. This lazy key? Sorry it's a bad habit... This is for fun-- my tone isn't dour. But someone has to check you-- You're drunk on power, editing for hours... New song?; I didn't see. Because it's too long & I didn't read... I'll be the first to say, your word-play is absurdly gay... Unlike you I'll keep it short & sweet. You're a dork, you're weak, & when I read your meme verse I fell asleep... & I'm horrified to say this, but you glorified a rapist... Compared to everyone else you think you're so much iller. I find that odd because your verses have so much filler. Lars on your dick because you rhyme multiple syllables. He should like me more-- my slant rhymes are fucking incredible... I won't waste your time with gunbars Or insult your girl. But I can rap WITHOUT your manual-- I'll give it a whirl. Your next one? Please save it. No, wait, go ahead and post text manifestos from ya mom's basement... Everyone loves you; how is this even possible? (Cuz)If you ask me, you peaked seven drops-ago. So PM me dude; I've got a few lines for you. You'll have to settle for me, cuz Blue Bayou wouldn't waste his time on you. Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 02-20-2020 at 01:06 AM. |
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