Week 5: Habitat vs Slecht - SLECHT WINS

Saint · 02-12-2020, 03:18 AM

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the stickied rule thread. Records updated in rankings.

DUE Sunday, @Habitat @Slechtq

Habitat · 02-12-2020, 11:37 AM

You've got some explaining to do, rape accusations are exceeding the hundreds
Dude's such a purvey guy like me oughtta make it my business to start feeding him punches

slecht · 02-12-2020, 07:43 PM

No need for low blows, I'll show what I can do with both hands
These fist...quick n clean to rip habit out like I passed a 12 step program

Vapeo · 02-13-2020, 11:36 PM

Slechtq dominated with the addiction line

v Slech

FGR · 02-13-2020, 11:46 PM

Im going with hab..

"These fist quick n clean to rip habit out" threw me off... Saying ur fist are quick n clean to rip habit out. Is wierd to me.. Liked what u were going for. But for me it didnt hit all like that... Hab had a alright bar.. Perv a guy was alright..enough for the win

V hab

Amen · 02-14-2020, 01:55 PM

Sletchq that concept was good. Had you worded it a bit more harsher, could’ve been dope. You took the lazy simile route lol.

Fresh do better broski.

Sletchq

dull boy · 02-14-2020, 05:23 PM

I vote you both take an L for this

Saint · 02-16-2020, 11:26 PM

Up over closed battles

Inno · 02-16-2020, 11:32 PM

Yeah I got Slechtq his punch was a better to me. I got perv a guy like me.... but it just didn’t hit as hard. Good battle tho

Adverse · 02-16-2020, 11:33 PM

Hab always pulling these words out I've got to look up. But i really liked his bar after the research, sletch used a rehash bar that's been done time and time again differently. I'll roll with Hab

V/Hab

Chemist · 02-17-2020, 12:57 AM

Winner SLECHT

both had cool lines
going for the crispier punch

sral · 02-17-2020, 05:36 PM

I much preferred Hab’s conceptually, it was the fresher feeling of the two for sure, but Slecht has the better execution and wording here (with an older feeling concept)

It’s a close battle for that reason, diff pros and cons, the execution was the deciding factor for me in the end so I’m going with Slecht

Ryno · 02-17-2020, 05:59 PM

Conceptually & wording wise, I’m going Habitat.

V/Fresh

dull boy · 02-17-2020, 06:14 PM

Vote - Hab

Not a clear winner here for me. Changed my vote from Hab to Slech to Hab. Didn’t like Hab’s set up but there wasn’t much wrong with it besides it being too generic. Slech’s concept was too simple and didn’t have the other intangibles to lift it.

Blue Bayou · 02-17-2020, 07:06 PM

I usually fuck with Slechtq but ive got Hab pretty clearly here tbh

Perv a guy like me is actually quite smooth if you're saying it correctly and conceptually it's a way better attempt....multi and set up were cool

Habit just been done a bunch of times...flip was cool enough but rip out habit seems like weird delivery to me in the context of the punch

Props to both my vote is for Hab

Saint · 02-17-2020, 11:57 PM

Up over closed battles @Ouch @Barcotic @Sinacog @Cashius

Ouch · 02-18-2020, 12:29 AM

Alright I read this early when I woke up.. and thought I’m not voting in this because it’s too close.. there was one other battle like this... and I read it twice since...

Both of the wording was slightly mixed and jumbled up both pretty good concepts although I’m sure used before... both on the same level, there isn’t a clear winner really

But I’ve got to pick slet as the winner it was just a little cleaner... but again hard to choose

slecht · 02-18-2020, 01:10 AM

Good match player @Habitat

Saint · 02-18-2020, 01:31 AM

Slecht Wins

02-12-2020, 03:18 AM	#1
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,251 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535868	Week 5: Habitat vs Slecht - SLECHT WINS You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the stickied rule thread. Records updated in rankings. DUE Sunday, @Habitat @Slechtq __________________ Last edited by Saint; 02-18-2020 at 01:31 AM.

02-12-2020, 11:37 AM	#2
Habitat Make my day Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 742 Battle Record: 8-6 Champed - 1-2 LR Tournament Rep Power: 7519562	You've got some explaining to do, rape accusations are exceeding the hundreds Dude's such a purvey guy like me oughtta make it my business to start feeding him punches __________________ Last edited by Habitat; 02-12-2020 at 11:42 AM.

02-16-2020, 11:26 PM	#8
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,251 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535868	Up over closed battles __________________

02-17-2020, 12:57 AM	#11
Chemist Try this shit Join Date: Sep 2015 Location: uninhabitable Posts: 365 Battle Record: 5-11 Rep Power: 0	Winner SLECHT both had cool lines going for the crispier punch __________________

02-17-2020, 05:36 PM	#12
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,605 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899396	I much preferred Hab’s conceptually, it was the fresher feeling of the two for sure, but Slecht has the better execution and wording here (with an older feeling concept) It’s a close battle for that reason, diff pros and cons, the execution was the deciding factor for me in the end so I’m going with Slecht __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

02-12-2020, 07:43 PM	#3
slecht Twitter: @ricanjq Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 581 Battle Record: 4-12 Champed - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 2236283	No need for low blows, I'll show what I can do with both hands These fist...quick n clean to rip habit out like I passed a 12 step program

02-13-2020, 11:46 PM	#5
FGR Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 564 Battle Record: 16-17 Rep Power: 8596598	Im going with hab.. "These fist quick n clean to rip habit out" threw me off... Saying ur fist are quick n clean to rip habit out. Is wierd to me.. Liked what u were going for. But for me it didnt hit all like that... Hab had a alright bar.. Perv a guy was alright..enough for the win V hab

02-14-2020, 01:55 PM	#6
Amen As-salamu alaykum! Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 8,462 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Season 6 Rep Power: 0	Sletchq that concept was good. Had you worded it a bit more harsher, could’ve been dope. You took the lazy simile route lol. Fresh do better broski. Sletchq

02-14-2020, 05:23 PM	#7
dull boy consults Lloyd Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 4,053 Battle Record: 0-8 Champed -1-2 Punch League Roast Rep Power: 39345604	I vote you both take an L for this

02-16-2020, 11:32 PM	#9
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	Yeah I got Slechtq his punch was a better to me. I got perv a guy like me.... but it just didn’t hit as hard. Good battle tho

02-16-2020, 11:33 PM	#10
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Hab always pulling these words out I've got to look up. But i really liked his bar after the research, sletch used a rehash bar that's been done time and time again differently. I'll roll with Hab V/Hab

02-17-2020, 05:59 PM	#13
Ryno Retired Join Date: Jul 2018 Posts: 647 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 1601594	Conceptually & wording wise, I’m going Habitat. V/Fresh

02-17-2020, 06:14 PM	#14
dull boy consults Lloyd Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 4,053 Battle Record: 0-8 Champed -1-2 Punch League Roast Rep Power: 39345604	Vote - Hab Not a clear winner here for me. Changed my vote from Hab to Slech to Hab. Didn’t like Hab’s set up but there wasn’t much wrong with it besides it being too generic. Slech’s concept was too simple and didn’t have the other intangibles to lift it.

02-17-2020, 07:06 PM	#15
Blue Bayou Ukrainian Howlitzers Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,098 Battle Record: 41-24 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 3 - Alias Tournament II - Fight Night XLVIII - Fight Night XXV - Fight Night XV - Fight Night (3x) - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Tag Team Season 3 - Lyric Olympics - 1-2 Punch League (3x) - Battle Arena League (2x) - Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 - BA Tag - NPL Roast - Netcees Pic League Rep Power: 17502335	I usually fuck with Slechtq but ive got Hab pretty clearly here tbh Perv a guy like me is actually quite smooth if you're saying it correctly and conceptually it's a way better attempt....multi and set up were cool Habit just been done a bunch of times...flip was cool enough but rip out habit seems like weird delivery to me in the context of the punch Props to both my vote is for Hab __________________ "I shit myself I had to throw my underwear in the dumpster outback Uve won" -kungfugrip

02-17-2020, 11:57 PM	#16
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,251 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535868	Up over closed battles @Ouch @Barcotic @Sinacog @Cashius __________________

02-18-2020, 12:29 AM	#17
Ouch Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2019 Posts: 5,677 Battle Record: 1-5 Accomplishments - Lost to Kill Spree Champed - Wall Talking Rep Power: 4052255	Alright I read this early when I woke up.. and thought I’m not voting in this because it’s too close.. there was one other battle like this... and I read it twice since... Both of the wording was slightly mixed and jumbled up both pretty good concepts although I’m sure used before... both on the same level, there isn’t a clear winner really But I’ve got to pick slet as the winner it was just a little cleaner... but again hard to choose

02-18-2020, 01:10 AM	#18
slecht Twitter: @ricanjq Join Date: May 2016 Posts: 581 Battle Record: 4-12 Champed - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 2236283	Good match player @Habitat

02-18-2020, 01:31 AM	#19
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,251 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535868	Slecht Wins __________________