THE OPEN MIC CYPHER

Adverse · 02-08-2020, 11:17 PM

Man these rappers ain’t touching me like they straight germaphobes
All it takes is one call and they getting thrown out like burner phones
In my own league, feels like I’m on this earth alone
And don’t get wavy, like a Marvel character know I surf with chrome
Yo Exis, don’t mind The hogwash or the “captain dog dick”s
That’s just the position you got these bitches in that look like you playing leap frog with
I’m higher than Rebel Wilson being who I’m on the seesaw with
Got an Italian bitch ordering fettuccine with a side of my meatballs quick

Pharaohs Army · 02-09-2020, 01:25 AM

2,4,6,8, I skimmed a few tracks of your mixtape. It was okay. You have good multies, but it's not ear-candy if you know what I mean. Some, but not all of it was "clean". But don't throw it away. I'd be more interested in how you sound today. I have one recording of myself on a CD once my fears were allayed. Bout 5 years ago as well. I had it on youtube but deleted the account. Audio?- I'll probably never figure it out. It's hard; like making rhymes in a foreign language. Just gotta keep trying, and stay sanguine. Just gotta stick with it, like Exis, no matter how many times he's vanquished. Then you go order fettuccine with meatballs, at a banquet. Then you go home and sleep, under a blanket. After so many takes, there's only so many ways, you can say-shit. So if you drop a new one, lemme know when you've made it.

02-08-2020, 11:17 PM	#1
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Man these rappers ain’t touching me like they straight germaphobes All it takes is one call and they getting thrown out like burner phones In my own league, feels like I’m on this earth alone And don’t get wavy, like a Marvel character know I surf with chrome Yo Exis, don’t mind The hogwash or the “captain dog dick”s That’s just the position you got these bitches in that look like you playing leap frog with I’m higher than Rebel Wilson being who I’m on the seesaw with Got an Italian bitch ordering fettuccine with a side of my meatballs quick

02-09-2020, 01:25 AM	#2
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	2,4,6,8, I skimmed a few tracks of your mixtape. It was okay. You have good multies, but it's not ear-candy if you know what I mean. Some, but not all of it was "clean". But don't throw it away. I'd be more interested in how you sound today. I have one recording of myself on a CD once my fears were allayed. Bout 5 years ago as well. I had it on youtube but deleted the account. Audio?- I'll probably never figure it out. It's hard; like making rhymes in a foreign language. Just gotta keep trying, and stay sanguine. Just gotta stick with it, like Exis, no matter how many times he's vanquished. Then you go order fettuccine with meatballs, at a banquet. Then you go home and sleep, under a blanket. After so many takes, there's only so many ways, you can say-shit. So if you drop a new one, lemme know when you've made it.