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Diablo · 01-30-2020, 05:44 PM

I fucked with the flow. Content wise it almost read like a quick off the cuff key, so it’s hard to really critique and get into the technical aspects behind it. I know how it is, sometimes you just want to dust the keyboard off and get something down to see if you can still do it. Your verses always have a good implied rhythmic cadence to them, which works well in text, and the broken down bar style you utilise also works for you. I enjoyed it, for what it’s worth.

Keep that pen moving!

01-30-2020, 05:44 PM	#3
Diablo Badgerdick Join Date: Jul 2015 Location: Showdown City Posts: 2,634 Battle Record: 11-2 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 22685552	I fucked with the flow. Content wise it almost read like a quick off the cuff key, so it’s hard to really critique and get into the technical aspects behind it. I know how it is, sometimes you just want to dust the keyboard off and get something down to see if you can still do it. Your verses always have a good implied rhythmic cadence to them, which works well in text, and the broken down bar style you utilise also works for you. I enjoyed it, for what it’s worth. Keep that pen moving!