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Old 11-15-2019, 12:17 AM   #1
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malnourished, malevolent, maladjusted malaise
talking in malformed metaphors to try and explain

pretty much sums it up.

taped push signs over doors tailored to pull
judges with mallets in the same shape of my skull

loved this image personally. both. mostly the latter, but the former is a nice "fuck you"

bloodsucker, with lost childhood adult spaces

i'd love you to expand on this more. just to see what it means for you. but i won't count on it.

innate phrasing becomes coding for crisis
like blinking twice, as a signal to police snipers

not sure why but probably my favorite segment of this

thank god somebody is keeping the vibe alive.

sorry i couldn't leave you something more meaningful. it's been a long, long week.

thanks, as always
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Old 11-15-2019, 12:21 AM   #2
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malnourished, malevolent, maladjusted malaise
talking in malformed metaphors to try and explain

pretty much sums it up.

taped push signs over doors tailored to pull
judges with mallets in the same shape of my skull

loved this image personally. both. mostly the latter, but the former is a nice "fuck you"

bloodsucker, with lost childhood adult spaces

i'd love you to expand on this more. just to see what it means for you. but i won't count on it.

innate phrasing becomes coding for crisis
like blinking twice, as a signal to police snipers

not sure why but probably my favorite segment of this

thank god somebody is keeping the vibe alive.

sorry i couldn't leave you something more meaningful. it's been a long, long week.

thanks, as always
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