Added drums this time

[Finnydot]

Originally Posted by Lenox

Thanks bro

https://soundcloud.com/139_lenox/fog

This any better?

The loop itself was off. I don't know what you're using to make beats, but the loop sounds like there was an extra beat, or that first beat was late to the rest of the sample.

Drums themselves SOUNDED good, but the pattern didn't match the loop.

I can tell you're trying different things tho, so keep building. Don't take any of this feedback negatively, you're improving.

If this is something you want to do then keep with it. Only time will make you better, trust.