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09-15-2019, 10:00 AM
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obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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don't know why this didn't get more distinction.
a lot of quotables. some times i think it may have gotten tacky but then the next line would just be another smooth transition, with another clever little attachment. the thing here was consistency which is a huge flaw in a lot of writing. you'll see 2-3 good lines then the rest just stumble in, taking away from the luster of the first few. but this was pretty good throughout. i liked the correlation of slang/euphemisms constantly, and being used with words that fit the scheme -(thats the crux of what you did) the flex piece was very cool. some ones made me chuckle, and you actually got a few thoughts across - religion, and the tel aviv reference. antivax gas dentist put together was cool. you can see the flow of your thoughts and the knowledge of things going on in the world to connect it better. really good put together
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