Summer Classic Topical: Round 1: 5. Blue Bayou Vs. 12. Adonis [Blue 5-0]

Candy · 07-24-2019, 07:07 AM

blue:
dope vocab and you really ran it home with emotion.. great depiction of a society torn by its control it felt like if you were to spit it it would come out in one breath.. very fluent I am glad to have seen you do a topical piece..

Adonis:
great ender this was very poetic lol to the extreme.. def had a nice heart beat to it that projected the reader along smoothly.. vocab was on point and the subtle story was def inspiring..

Creativity-- adonis
Entertainment-- blue bayou
Flow-- adonis
Rhyme Scheme-- adonis
Consistency/Topic-- blue bayou
Literary Devices (alliteration, assonance, allusion, etc..) -- blue bayou
Emotion-- blue bayou
Imagery-- blue bayou

Vote-- blue bayou

07-24-2019, 07:07 AM	#1
Candy Sell Her Join Date: Feb 2018 Posts: 1,075 Battle Record: 1-3 Rep Power: 8518432	blue: dope vocab and you really ran it home with emotion.. great depiction of a society torn by its control it felt like if you were to spit it it would come out in one breath.. very fluent I am glad to have seen you do a topical piece.. Adonis: great ender this was very poetic lol to the extreme.. def had a nice heart beat to it that projected the reader along smoothly.. vocab was on point and the subtle story was def inspiring.. Creativity-- adonis Entertainment-- blue bayou Flow-- adonis Rhyme Scheme-- adonis Consistency/Topic-- blue bayou Literary Devices (alliteration, assonance, allusion, etc..) -- blue bayou Emotion-- blue bayou Imagery-- blue bayou Vote-- blue bayou __________________ curious más curioso y más curioso