Round one: Mike Wrecka vs. Witty [Witty Wins 5-3]

zygote · 06-12-2013, 02:42 AM

Enjoyed Witty's environmental aspects and themes contrasting with the grey-scale of the image stimulus. MikeWrecka had a great representation of the strange technological aspects of the picture and the musical instruments in the picture. E.g., " fully harmonious with the ocean, conducting symphonies/
with hydroponic harvests erupting instantly," - nice side-references to musical things without them being the focus of the writing itself, your subtle things like that and deft symbolism was great. Witty also had powerful writing designed for emotional response, e.g., " Tossed perfection aside, betrayed the earth and caused infection" strong writing and keeping with your recurring themes of desolation. A difficult contest to judge, slightly voting for MikeWrecka.

06-12-2013, 02:42 AM	#1
zygote Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 501 Battle Record: 33-12 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Art of Writing League (3x) Rep Power: 737828	Enjoyed Witty's environmental aspects and themes contrasting with the grey-scale of the image stimulus. MikeWrecka had a great representation of the strange technological aspects of the picture and the musical instruments in the picture. E.g., " fully harmonious with the ocean, conducting symphonies/ with hydroponic harvests erupting instantly," - nice side-references to musical things without them being the focus of the writing itself, your subtle things like that and deft symbolism was great. Witty also had powerful writing designed for emotional response, e.g., " Tossed perfection aside, betrayed the earth and caused infection" strong writing and keeping with your recurring themes of desolation. A difficult contest to judge, slightly voting for MikeWrecka.