INF vs Ryno [INF WINS]

Answer · 06-29-2019, 07:52 AM

Your alias run fell to the wayside pussy. boy had voters ALL to blame..
Slinged Mud & Spinned ya Wheels...got stuck in a Rough Patch thinkin that Alt a Reign

dope start, I dig this

This guns an offer...quit PM'in ME tips on how to word shit fuckin proper
Next time you force feed say ah ah I can 'Point at your own Mouth' like a hungry toddler

not really feeling this. Something about the "ah ah" and hungry toddler reference just cheapens the bar

My head's in your wife thighs eatin box as a snack. rockin the snatch..
Caught in the act? Ignorance had her explain it away ON ME'...I'm God of the Gap

I think the concept has a lot of potential, but the wording on this just kinda feels odd

Knock 'em blind. Michelangelo - paint bodies on floors off the side
Fuck the bread...1 punch 'see black & white swirls' then end up spread on the Marble Ry

didnt really connect as a haymaker for me but still pretty solid.

Got dope aim &&& hit a whole range. ima slump this faggot reckless..
Cross the line...leave this boarder in a 'Big Bend Formation' that'd rival Mexico/Texas

i fuck with this one, no complaints

Kid ain't a winner...he just puts on an act. This climax ends in a thriller..
'Finkle is Einhorn'....Inno's Ace cuz he gotta be CRAZY to match up a fake bitch w/ a killer

i had to look up the reference because ive never seen ace ventura, but i dunno - to me it just doesn't really have that sting on it

Last match was 2 vs 1...pussy...I’ll do #’s putting the tech to ya fkn spine
Ry + Inf = what? This equation’ll only be solved once Ex reaches the other side

the X on the other side concept had tons of potential but something about the wording just felt off. I thought this was still pretty solid just based off the strength of the concept though

My aim is feared, I don’t play games w/ queers, bullets weave through ya guts
Think black mirror...dawg all that bitch in ur character is leaving you fucked

I haven't seen the new season of black mirror yet. I looked at the summary of striking vipers and I see what you're going for, but the biggest issue I think is that this is kinda just a regurgitation of a lot of really old concepts e.g. the bitch in you vs a real woman, character in personality versus an actual game or fictional character and being fucked metaphorically versus being fucked literally. I appreciate that this is a new interpretation of those concepts based on a more current reference, but it still involves 3 really played out concepts.

I’m back & it sucks, swag is surreal while ya shitty lines make us giggle at will
Get stretched w/ no chill! These hands r Gunna hit ya frame & leave u drippin for real

solid, I think you could've made it a little stronger with more emphasis on swag/jewelry in the set-up

I’m swinging the steel! This ain’t a game w/e I pick up homie just won’t miss
Legit. Get too close I’ll let the pump burst ya stomach on some dig dug shit

ok. Could've tied a little bit more into this

Listen bro...It’s a fatality if me & ya wife bonin, her kink level is mind blowin
Leavin her wide open! Let’s see Kenshi take brutal beating while blind folded

solid. Would've liked to see at least some kind of mortal kombat reference in the set-up though

My time potent! But I’ve got shanks w/ rusty grooves that’ll be cuttin u all day
Knife work nigga! I get straight to the point, idgaf if it rubs u the wrong way

Eh I've kinda seen this idea flipped in similar ways, and it doesn't really sting as much as it could

overall, I think inf had some higher highs and lower lows whereas ryno was a bit more consistent throughout but didn't have anything that really resonated with me except the algebra bar. I think if ryno closed with a stronger last line, I might be leaning towards him a bit more, but inf probably had 3 out of my favorite 4 bars of the battle

v/ inf

06-29-2019, 07:52 AM	#7
Answer He / Him / His Join Date: Oct 2013 Posts: 1,701 Battle Record: 20-1 Champed - Summer Classic IX - Netcees Battle League - Fight night 15 Rep Power: 14633673	Your alias run fell to the wayside pussy. boy had voters ALL to blame.. Slinged Mud & Spinned ya Wheels...got stuck in a Rough Patch thinkin that Alt a Reign dope start, I dig this This guns an offer...quit PM'in ME tips on how to word shit fuckin proper Next time you force feed say ah ah I can 'Point at your own Mouth' like a hungry toddler not really feeling this. Something about the "ah ah" and hungry toddler reference just cheapens the bar My head's in your wife thighs eatin box as a snack. rockin the snatch.. Caught in the act? Ignorance had her explain it away ON ME'...I'm God of the Gap I think the concept has a lot of potential, but the wording on this just kinda feels odd Knock 'em blind. Michelangelo - paint bodies on floors off the side Fuck the bread...1 punch 'see black & white swirls' then end up spread on the Marble Ry didnt really connect as a haymaker for me but still pretty solid. Got dope aim &&& hit a whole range. ima slump this faggot reckless.. Cross the line...leave this boarder in a 'Big Bend Formation' that'd rival Mexico/Texas i fuck with this one, no complaints Kid ain't a winner...he just puts on an act. This climax ends in a thriller.. 'Finkle is Einhorn'....Inno's Ace cuz he gotta be CRAZY to match up a fake bitch w/ a killer i had to look up the reference because ive never seen ace ventura, but i dunno - to me it just doesn't really have that sting on it Last match was 2 vs 1...pussy...I’ll do #’s putting the tech to ya fkn spine Ry + Inf = what? This equation’ll only be solved once Ex reaches the other side the X on the other side concept had tons of potential but something about the wording just felt off. I thought this was still pretty solid just based off the strength of the concept though My aim is feared, I don’t play games w/ queers, bullets weave through ya guts Think black mirror...dawg all that bitch in ur character is leaving you fucked I haven't seen the new season of black mirror yet. I looked at the summary of striking vipers and I see what you're going for, but the biggest issue I think is that this is kinda just a regurgitation of a lot of really old concepts e.g. the bitch in you vs a real woman, character in personality versus an actual game or fictional character and being fucked metaphorically versus being fucked literally. I appreciate that this is a new interpretation of those concepts based on a more current reference, but it still involves 3 really played out concepts. I’m back & it sucks, swag is surreal while ya shitty lines make us giggle at will Get stretched w/ no chill! These hands r Gunna hit ya frame & leave u drippin for real solid, I think you could've made it a little stronger with more emphasis on swag/jewelry in the set-up I’m swinging the steel! This ain’t a game w/e I pick up homie just won’t miss Legit. Get too close I’ll let the pump burst ya stomach on some dig dug shit ok. Could've tied a little bit more into this Listen bro...It’s a fatality if me & ya wife bonin, her kink level is mind blowin Leavin her wide open! Let’s see Kenshi take brutal beating while blind folded solid. Would've liked to see at least some kind of mortal kombat reference in the set-up though My time potent! But I’ve got shanks w/ rusty grooves that’ll be cuttin u all day Knife work nigga! I get straight to the point, idgaf if it rubs u the wrong way Eh I've kinda seen this idea flipped in similar ways, and it doesn't really sting as much as it could overall, I think inf had some higher highs and lower lows whereas ryno was a bit more consistent throughout but didn't have anything that really resonated with me except the algebra bar. I think if ryno closed with a stronger last line, I might be leaning towards him a bit more, but inf probably had 3 out of my favorite 4 bars of the battle v/ inf Last edited by Answer; 06-29-2019 at 10:03 AM.