Allen Knight vs Veritas[OPEN]

Sinacog · 06-29-2019, 12:31 AM

Veritas -

Compact drop; fully equipped with nice punchlines; and good rhyming. You have a lot of comedy lines; and they work. I quite enjoyed this written verse for it's quality and merit. It was a enjoyable read. Good work on this verse. A lot of good lines here.

Allen Knight -

Good verse; you're a good punchline writer; and you have a lot of good writing merit. I enjoy your punchline rhyming; and good form in a lot of your rhyming. You're good in ways. Nice work.

Overall -

Good battle here; I have Veritas winning for his quality verse. Nice one.

V/ Veritas

06-29-2019, 12:31 AM	#10
Sinacog R.Killsbury 3000 Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,299 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129215	Veritas - Compact drop; fully equipped with nice punchlines; and good rhyming. You have a lot of comedy lines; and they work. I quite enjoyed this written verse for it's quality and merit. It was a enjoyable read. Good work on this verse. A lot of good lines here. Allen Knight - Good verse; you're a good punchline writer; and you have a lot of good writing merit. I enjoy your punchline rhyming; and good form in a lot of your rhyming. You're good in ways. Nice work. Overall - Good battle here; I have Veritas winning for his quality verse. Nice one. V/ Veritas