02-03-2019, 02:41 AM | #1 |
Sini
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Sinacog vs. Pharaohs Army FUCKING SINACOG WINS
10 lines..let's go..
due today or something..lol.. |
02-03-2019, 02:53 AM | #2 |
Sini
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im a cynical tyrant, the pinnacle ur minuscule pilot
rhythmical iris, ill kill pharaohs army like god with biblical fire im ripping dummies, im sadistic while ur flippin crummy sharp blades will put u in a tomb like the iron maiden for egyptian mummies i read the bible discern the book, ur a learning rook i have a message from the lord to prostrate pharaoh like moses with the burning bush im ripping hierarchy, im a disciple with a vindictive light marking two blades that'll son pharaoh like egyptian dynastys scimitars will rock with slits, omniscient with solemn whims my tongue will make it a w(r)ap for pharaoh when i bury him in a sarcophagus |
02-03-2019, 02:57 AM | #3 |
Banned
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WOW you've really tore it up! Wish I could read more of your stuff. There isn't enough.
Listen I'm just gonna lay it on the line. This will be my first win. I'm 0 and 5, and I hope you die. I am the DEMON SLAYER. After you write this verse you'll be even gayer. Horrible lines; forced rhymes. You know that you wrote it- don't make me quote it. Your writtens are not slick. Your repetition and grammatical errors are enough to make someone sick. I'm prolific. The most gifted. I can tell that you're nervous. Look; I'll write every single one your verses: Blades and Guns, Hades and Sun, Bible and Lore, Try some more? Won't work partner. You need to work harder. I'll leave you disgraced. You better change your name or leave this place. Nice Try Sinai, but I'm hating your rhymes. &Today's the day you die |
02-03-2019, 09:18 AM | #4 |
Badgerdick
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lmao legit love Pharoah but I have Sinacog winning here
WTF? |
02-03-2019, 02:30 PM | #6 | |
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Because all I talked about was his bad writing? Sorry, I can't help it. Daily dose of this:
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02-03-2019, 03:14 PM | #7 |
DMS—Diddled My Stick
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Same but I got some complaints.
1. Pharoah’s army was drowned when the seas stopped dividing, so kinda the opposite of fire. 2. Iron Maddens weren’t an actual thing, someone made a fake one and sent it o the museum. For real tho, Sin came with some good bars, Pharoah also came with some heat, the entire fucking landfill garbage fire kinda heat. V/ Sin |
06-26-2019, 05:04 PM | #8 |
Wreckin em
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Rhymes/Multi/Inners - sin all day. Phar seemed to rhyming internal only at some points, and a lot felt forced.
Punches/Personals - again I go with sin. Even if some of the punches didn't fit perfectly as DMS stated above, some of pharos weren't there at all for me. Metaphors/Wordplay - phar didn't seem to have much to offer here except the Sinai line which I really wasn't into much. Sin had higher key, and the less interesting wrap line, but both I feel were executed decent so I give this to sin. Vocabulary/Technique - sin. 'Nough said. Structure/Flow - sin again. The vocab probably was a big part of this, but it's hard to imagine pharos being read as well as sins this round. Overall - sin got this one hands down. His style is different which in some cases may work against him given the nature of how votes can go down, but I find it hard to believe anyone could see this any differently. Sin used his strengths to keep it consistent and threw down for sure. Pharos just wasn't as focused, maybe he rushed or didn't take sin seriously and paid for it. VOTE - Sinacog
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06-27-2019, 11:27 PM | #10 |
B on the look out
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Diablos vote doesn't count...and you voted for yourself...its 1-0...stfu...and no I wont vote...
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06-27-2019, 11:36 PM | #11 |
Wreckin em
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You seriously think I'm sin? Like for real?
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