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06-05-2019, 03:41 AM
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R.Killsbury 3000
Join Date: Dec 2018
Posts: 2,299
Battle Record: 4-25
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I'll give you feed-back.
I thought this was a excellent piece. Full of eclectic good writing; with nice prose and harmony. Good rhyme scheme and rhyme meter here. You're quite the gifted writer, and I enjoy reading your writtens. Good work on this piece. The 'Swimming in a sunken boat' line was pretty nice. Good work, Dead Man. Keep writing! |
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