suthaveli 0-0 vs sharp 0-0 (open for votes)

Cereal · 05-07-2019, 08:31 PM

suth:
I have never read your pieces before yet they seem so familiar maybe have you been under other names? either way the story progression is what was dope with the slight on and off rhyme scheme a depictive vocab the through and through reading of your story was smooth all the way through even down to a gun reference by name.. but in the end it really was the pace of the story where it just ran as a nice sunday morning read.. good drop..

sharp:
lol dope the deliver was crammed full of action you could really get into the tension you delivered in your story.. it was kinda a three syllable rhyme structure style tightness where even if it wasn't the lines were hot enough to thread them together for a real punchy feel.. all in all a cool lil piece with some well timed humour and promo for the site.. I think what I like mostly about the verse is the action very well delivered..

vote - suthaveli

just a more all round whole piece with what was given, more of a developed story and subject matter, but sharp def had some hits in there

05-07-2019, 08:31 PM	#4
Cereal killa Join Date: Jun 2018 Posts: 859 Battle Record: 1-6 Rep Power: 1312300	suth: I have never read your pieces before yet they seem so familiar maybe have you been under other names? either way the story progression is what was dope with the slight on and off rhyme scheme a depictive vocab the through and through reading of your story was smooth all the way through even down to a gun reference by name.. but in the end it really was the pace of the story where it just ran as a nice sunday morning read.. good drop.. sharp: lol dope the deliver was crammed full of action you could really get into the tension you delivered in your story.. it was kinda a three syllable rhyme structure style tightness where even if it wasn't the lines were hot enough to thread them together for a real punchy feel.. all in all a cool lil piece with some well timed humour and promo for the site.. I think what I like mostly about the verse is the action very well delivered.. vote - suthaveli just a more all round whole piece with what was given, more of a developed story and subject matter, but sharp def had some hits in there