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05-04-2019, 05:29 PM
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ZAAAAM
Join Date: Jun 2016
Posts: 1,623
Battle Record: 6-10
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Diablo: good rhyme schemes here and there was good balance throughout the verse. You wrote beautiful and everything meshed well. Only thing I wasn’t feelin was the vocab and multi usage.
Cereal: great usage of the topic, all around stunning imagery and vocabulary. The storyline was superb and I felt this was a step up from diablos tbh. Vote cereal |
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