Week 4: Cred vs Blas (CRED WINS)

Jabari Black · 04-15-2019, 02:48 PM

Blas, pretty good punch but the execution is messy. You trying to weave a few things into one punch - you got the him getting rejected concept and the his bars ain’t good concept in the set up. I get it but you shoulda found a more concise way to word it. I did like the blue fed him punch in the set up though. Cred it play was done recently. Ended the punch well though. Overall solid.

Cred I’m feeling conflicted by your punch. The wording is dope up until the punch to me. The punch was kinda light to me because the gassed/standing behind glass flip was moreso just to associated concepts as opposed to a heavy flip. I also thought the phrase after gassed you was unnecessarily wordy. Overall, the wording (besides the issue I just talked about) elevated just a decent concept.

Overall, this one was a really tough one to judge. Cred has the more straightforward punch, but his punch came off as more basic. Cred wording was a bit cleaner but I think both could have cleaned up the execution. I think Blas concept was played cus credit has been done recent. I hate to sound critical but just showing how tight this battle is.

I got Cred edging this one with the slightly better execution and a bit fresher concept, even though Blas had be more complex concept.

Mvgt Cred

04-15-2019, 02:48 PM	#16
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764499	Blas, pretty good punch but the execution is messy. You trying to weave a few things into one punch - you got the him getting rejected concept and the his bars ain’t good concept in the set up. I get it but you shoulda found a more concise way to word it. I did like the blue fed him punch in the set up though. Cred it play was done recently. Ended the punch well though. Overall solid. Cred I’m feeling conflicted by your punch. The wording is dope up until the punch to me. The punch was kinda light to me because the gassed/standing behind glass flip was moreso just to associated concepts as opposed to a heavy flip. I also thought the phrase after gassed you was unnecessarily wordy. Overall, the wording (besides the issue I just talked about) elevated just a decent concept. Overall, this one was a really tough one to judge. Cred has the more straightforward punch, but his punch came off as more basic. Cred wording was a bit cleaner but I think both could have cleaned up the execution. I think Blas concept was played cus credit has been done recent. I hate to sound critical but just showing how tight this battle is. I got Cred edging this one with the slightly better execution and a bit fresher concept, even though Blas had be more complex concept. Mvgt Cred