Week 4: Miss Netcees vs Pharaohs Army - PA WINS

Flow · 04-08-2019, 08:22 PM

1-2 Week Four

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.

DUE FRIDAY (due to lateness closing everything today)
@Pharaohs Army
@Miss Netcees

Extensions need to be agreed by both parties

Pharaohs Army · 04-11-2019, 04:49 PM

Ugly-ass ho.. I'm trying to discover your purpose; what are you bringing?
Shiit.. The only thing worse than your text is your singing!

Miss Netcees · 04-12-2019, 05:25 PM

It's my turn to shine
Get on your knees and bow down The Crown is mine

White LGI · 04-12-2019, 11:38 PM

Lol vote pa

~RustyGunZ~ · 04-12-2019, 11:39 PM

we got a fuckin barn burner here boys

Maximus · 04-13-2019, 03:51 AM

ok miss netcees your punch last week was far better, atleast you did dissed your opponent. but this week you just made a statement dear, telling someone to bow down because the crown is yours is not a diss, no creativity, no wordplay and it wasnt even funny, atleast last week you brought something humorous.. anyways PA did just enough to take the W here.
v/Pharoahs Army

Ryno · 04-13-2019, 08:13 AM

V/PA... he had more of an actual diss

joog · 04-13-2019, 09:00 AM

Vote pharoah.
Pharoah was more direct
Mis netcee- try to be more direct when mak8ng ur bar, to diss ur opponent

Saint · 04-13-2019, 09:04 AM

V - PA. Personal vs nothing

Destroyer · 04-13-2019, 02:46 PM

Got PA here in a close one

Suthaveli · 04-13-2019, 03:50 PM

Here to get my vote count up.
Pa

Pharaohs Army · 04-14-2019, 02:13 AM

@Miss Netcees you're not really ugly it's just a punch

Flow · 04-14-2019, 05:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pharaohs Army

@Miss Netcees you're not really ugly it's just a punch

Slayed me this

Vote PA for a punchline

Miss Netcees · 04-14-2019, 10:38 AM

No need to explain
diss battles suppose to be fun

thanks for dropping

Plot · 04-14-2019, 11:06 AM

This feels like de va ju.
DG was worse than last week, which was bad.
Pharoh had a diss.
V-PA

Sharp · 04-14-2019, 11:29 AM

It's Pharaoh's army, but the punch wasn't great. I like that you're going for something personal PA, but the punch itself is just a statement. You're referencing her and not really doing anything with it - it's not a creative diss, you're putting the responsibility of coming up with a diss onto the reader with a 'remember that time...'

I don't wanna prescribe a specific stylistic choice here since there are so many possibilities, but a rule of thumb should be to treat the bar kind of like a joke. Even if you're not going for 'ha ha', if we don't see the crux of the punch coming, it's more effective

V/pa

Chyeahhh!!! · 04-14-2019, 07:04 PM

Mis Netcees was too much like a proclamation though

Pharoah had a simple doable personal

vote P Army

Jabari Black · 04-14-2019, 09:14 PM

Miss Netcees you’re going to have to actually punch to get a win this season. This bar was just a statement bar and a light one at that. PA, the punch was very basic to me. Still won this easily.

Mvgt Pharaohs Army

Kill Spree · 04-14-2019, 10:21 PM

Vote PA... wasn’t a good bar but at least showed effort to diss

Flow · 04-15-2019, 09:05 PM

Pa 12

04-14-2019, 07:04 PM	#17
Chyeahhh!!! Saul Paul Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: remote location with a remote weapon station Posts: 6,398 Battle Record: 16-26 Rep Power: 1663351	Mis Netcees was too much like a proclamation though Pharoah had a simple doable personal vote P Army __________________ KNOW YOUR MAKER BEFORE YOU'RE MADE TO I know the ledge, his sister's a jumpoff

04-11-2019, 04:49 PM	#2
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	Ugly-ass ho.. I'm trying to discover your purpose; what are you bringing? Shiit.. The only thing worse than your text is your singing!

04-12-2019, 05:25 PM	#3
Miss Netcees Netcees's Hottest lady <3 Join Date: Mar 2019 Posts: 99 Rep Power: 335418	It's my turn to shine Get on your knees and bow down The Crown is mine

04-12-2019, 11:38 PM	#4
White LGI Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2019 Posts: 2,058 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Lol vote pa

04-12-2019, 11:39 PM	#5
~RustyGunZ~ (ง'̀-'́)ง Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 15,844 Battle Record: 52-28 Accomplishments -50+ wins Champed -Summer Classic VIII -Netcees Battle League -BA Picture -BA TagTeam -Fight Night Cypher I -Fight Night XXXV -Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 Rep Power: 85899406	we got a fuckin barn burner here boys

04-13-2019, 03:51 AM	#6
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169472	ok miss netcees your punch last week was far better, atleast you did dissed your opponent. but this week you just made a statement dear, telling someone to bow down because the crown is yours is not a diss, no creativity, no wordplay and it wasnt even funny, atleast last week you brought something humorous.. anyways PA did just enough to take the W here. v/Pharoahs Army

04-13-2019, 08:13 AM	#7
Ryno Retired Join Date: Jul 2018 Posts: 647 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 1601593	V/PA... he had more of an actual diss

04-13-2019, 09:00 AM	#8
joog Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 244 Battle Record: 3-1 Rep Power: 1432586	Vote pharoah. Pharoah was more direct Mis netcee- try to be more direct when mak8ng ur bar, to diss ur opponent

04-13-2019, 09:04 AM	#9
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,251 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535868	V - PA. Personal vs nothing

04-13-2019, 03:50 PM	#11
Suthaveli Prayers won't help. Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: Baltimore, Md Posts: 851 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 16534023	Here to get my vote count up. Pa

04-14-2019, 02:13 AM	#12
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	@Miss Netcees you're not really ugly it's just a punch

04-14-2019, 10:38 AM	#14
Miss Netcees Netcees's Hottest lady <3 Join Date: Mar 2019 Posts: 99 Rep Power: 335418	No need to explain diss battles suppose to be fun thanks for dropping

04-14-2019, 11:06 AM	#15
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,374 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309744	This feels like de va ju. DG was worse than last week, which was bad. Pharoh had a diss. V-PA

04-14-2019, 11:29 AM	#16
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601538	It's Pharaoh's army, but the punch wasn't great. I like that you're going for something personal PA, but the punch itself is just a statement. You're referencing her and not really doing anything with it - it's not a creative diss, you're putting the responsibility of coming up with a diss onto the reader with a 'remember that time...' I don't wanna prescribe a specific stylistic choice here since there are so many possibilities, but a rule of thumb should be to treat the bar kind of like a joke. Even if you're not going for 'ha ha', if we don't see the crux of the punch coming, it's more effective V/pa

04-14-2019, 09:14 PM	#18
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764499	Miss Netcees you’re going to have to actually punch to get a win this season. This bar was just a statement bar and a light one at that. PA, the punch was very basic to me. Still won this easily. Mvgt Pharaohs Army

04-14-2019, 10:21 PM	#19
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,460 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645698	Vote PA... wasn’t a good bar but at least showed effort to diss