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Upset Champion
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: West Mids
Posts: 3,861
Battle Record: 57-49
Accomplishments - 50 Wins
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- 1-2 Punch League (x2)
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![]() Week Three You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.
DUE THURSDAY @Miss Netcees @Cred Extensions need to be agreed by both parties |
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Netcees's Hottest lady <3
Join Date: Mar 2019
Posts: 99
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Netcees's Hottest lady <3
Join Date: Mar 2019
Posts: 99
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First off: Ya don't have no balls
Ya Fall faster than ya teardrops falls |
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The Biggest
Join Date: Jan 2015
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Battle Record: 67-32
Accomplishments - Gun Bar King
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- Battle Arena League
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I'll have this hoe swim wit the fishes. U ain't dodgin the lake.. this shit ain't Frogger
Forget about tanning.. THIS 2-Piece gon Lay u the fuck out before you hit the water |
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BesT™
Join Date: Feb 2019
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miss netcees tried some stuff
but cred DID some stuff v/ cred |
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Scream
Join Date: Jun 2015
Posts: 3,251
Battle Record: 63-35
Accomplishments - 50 Wins
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- Netcees Battle League
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Vote Cred -- good hit.. 2 piece was coo... Miss Netcees was succinct tho & better than before.
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Senior Member
Join Date: Feb 2019
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Cred wins
Gooonnneee@no balls |
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 2013
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lolzz, for some reason miss netcees' bar made me laugh for realz, quite cool but in the end Cred got this though
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HE / HIM / FRAC
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: PA
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Miss NC is improving with concepts each week, but cred got it on wording
V/cred |
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Retired
Join Date: Jul 2018
Posts: 647
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V/Cred... he had the harder bar between the 2
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Senior Member
Join Date: Feb 2014
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Cred got this. Two piece was dope
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 2014
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Lol wtf creds bar was fire
Unnecessary Fucking like Mike Tyson showing up with an Uzi to fight Stephen Hawkings lol. |
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Sun Tzu
Join Date: Mar 2018
Location: Atlanta, GA
Posts: 550
Battle Record: 13-6
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Miss Netcees you got a lot of work to do. Just needs a lot more complexity, both in the concept, wording - all of that. I see some slight improvements, but got some ways to go.
Cred this was fire af. Set it up well by alluding to dumping his body. 2 piece lay you out was dope af, but I though “before you hit the water” was a dope way to end the punch l since it plays off the set up. Well put together punch. Only critique i got is you typically a little more complex in your rhyme scheme and flow, but it ain’t a big deal. Overall, dope. Mvgt Cred |
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Senior Member
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Cred, ur joint was nice
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jun 2015
Posts: 734
Battle Record: 33-9
Champed - 1-2 Punch Onslaught II
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miss netcees def made me laugh with her first line
cred was nasty here v Cred
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Senior Member
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cred had a very dope bar. easily took it imo
vote Cred |
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Senior Member
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Yeah 2-piece was a dope angle.
V-Cred Robranda has never been serious |
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Yeah 2-piece was a dope angle.
V-Cred Robranda has never been serious |
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v/ The Cooler puerto rican
Keep at it miss netcees, cred just better worded bar and clearly more developed conceptually. 15-0
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