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Old 04-03-2019, 01:11 PM   #1
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This was solid. The flow at times was smooth however at times it appears choppy due to extended lines.

I'll now vanish your confidence like shoulder pops from tackles
Your career will only stay on it's feet if your rockin' in shackles
I'll drop whatever stems from your mouth like kids bobbin' for apples.

cool way to end the drop.

Watch all of you fuckers lie back like a reclinin' chair
& fuck the jokers,
That say in a sentence I can't place bitches in comas
Snitches it's over

Definitely feel the swag on this flex piece. overall the setback if the flow like I said is choppy at times. However, depending how you would flow this piece could make me change that view. Keep Writing Fam.
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