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03-29-2019, 07:10 AM
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Tread Lightly.
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 2,533
Battle Record: 26-9
Champed - Netcees Battle League
- Battle Arena
- Tag Team Tournament III
- Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant"
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Pretty cool. I like the 'quality of the cut' concept a lot but would change the execution slightly bc 'give JEM a praise' is a little awkward... 'nobody gon appraise gem/nobody gonna praise JEM' would be a little cleaner. Still an enjoyable bar though, good job.
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