LR Wk 2: Zeilti Vs Blas - Zelph wins

Real Spit · 03-26-2019, 07:45 PM

Blas.. I feel like some type of "eyes" tie in w/the setup would have really sold this one.. instead it ends up being a slightly offensive poke in the ribs.. i.e. girls don't say "heyyyy Zel" - that's the impression I get from it.. not very hard hitting, and without an additional tie in to sell the hazel part it's not as creative as it could be, but not bad and it does work w/ just the nut tie in. Overall, a good punch that could have been better.

Zelti.. never seen a tutu play and never would have imagined it being used in a battle, props for pulling that off without it being gay as fuck. The "a pair'll" tie in works well, both had some creativity, but your punch was harder than Blas' punch IMO due to the threat of violence, so for that, you get the vote

v/ Zel

03-26-2019, 07:45 PM	#6
Real Spit Member Join Date: Mar 2019 Posts: 84 Rep Power: 608133	Blas.. I feel like some type of "eyes" tie in w/the setup would have really sold this one.. instead it ends up being a slightly offensive poke in the ribs.. i.e. girls don't say "heyyyy Zel" - that's the impression I get from it.. not very hard hitting, and without an additional tie in to sell the hazel part it's not as creative as it could be, but not bad and it does work w/ just the nut tie in. Overall, a good punch that could have been better. Zelti.. never seen a tutu play and never would have imagined it being used in a battle, props for pulling that off without it being gay as fuck. The "a pair'll" tie in works well, both had some creativity, but your punch was harder than Blas' punch IMO due to the threat of violence, so for that, you get the vote v/ Zel