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Upset Champion
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: West Mids
Posts: 3,861
Battle Record: 57-49
Accomplishments - 50 Wins
Champed - BA Rookie Tourney
- 1-2 Punch League (x2)
- Pandemonium Cypher
- 1-2 Punch league Season 9
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![]() Week One You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the thread.
DUE THURSDAY @JEM @Chyeahhh!!! *The 1-2 league and it's mini LR league are one bar Vs one bar.*
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Saul Paul
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: remote location with a remote weapon station
Posts: 6,398
Battle Record: 16-26
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sup Dia
you've been a cold sore to the world since you were born to the board? a virus without a cure, you're herpes in human form
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Senior Member
Join Date: Feb 2019
Posts: 2,034
Battle Record: 3-3
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Ya music phony, whole story make believe... careers dying
ill expose his motives..run up and beat this faggot...Jamal lyon |
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Join Date: Mar 2019
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Not a fan of either but at least snitching had swag to his.. need to see some concepts or wit here guys come on now
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BesT™
Join Date: Feb 2019
Posts: 596
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Both are far too simple, chyeah had the wording down but snitching had a concept that wasn't absurdly straight forward so I have to give it to him.
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Bags will be avenged
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 12,622
Battle Record: 85-58
Accomplishments - 50+ Wins
Champed - Gimmick Battle League
- 1-2 Punch League (5x)
- Fight Night LXXIX
- Fight Night 4
- Netcees Battle League (2x)
- NPL Roast
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Got snitch for the relevant current event punch and better hit
Chyeahhh wasnt innacurate, it was just pretty lackluster in delivery V/snitch |
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Ukrainian Howlitzers
Join Date: May 2013
Posts: 5,091
Battle Record: 41-24
Accomplishments - Hall of Fame
Champed - NBL Season 3
- Alias Tournament II
- Fight Night XLVIII
- Fight Night XXV
- Fight Night XV
- Fight Night (3x)
- Netcees Battle League (4x)
- NBL Tag Team Season 3
- Lyric Olympics
- 1-2 Punch League (3x)
- Battle Arena League (2x)
- Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2
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Chyeahhhs wording was awesome but the punch was blahh
Snitchs bar was pretty decent.. coolish current event punch Vote - Snitch
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Shrewd as evearthed
Join Date: Aug 2014
Location: Wolverhampton, England
Posts: 8,274
Battle Record: 28-3
Champed - Gimmick Battle League
- The Winter Topical
- Topical Martyrs
- Lime Green Poetry Association
- Lyric Olympics
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- Black August II
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i got snitch too
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Sun Tzu
Join Date: Mar 2018
Location: Atlanta, GA
Posts: 550
Battle Record: 13-6
Champed - Battle Arena League
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Wanted to give this to Chyeahhh badly but I can’t lol.
Chyeahhhs punch was enjoyable but it just came off as a pure statement punch - something I think you can’t do in a 1-2 punch. I like the angle and the theme of the punch but there was just no real flip/double meaning in this - moreso just 3 separate disses with a common virus/hpv word association. This probably woulda landed on a full battle but here it just comes off as lacking a real punch. Snitch; no hate; I thought this was a lazy current event reference. Nothing against current event bars, but “beat up a faggot” is the simplest Jussie Smollet flip you can do - plus it’s been done already. On the plus side though, the set up was good. Music phony, make believe story, expose motive are all good tie ins. I just think the punch is really lazy. Anyways I got Chyeahhh with a concept with a lot of potential, but no punch. Snitch had a lazy concept but he executed it to perfection. I think it seem like I was overly harsh on snitch lol but I still got him winning by a comfortable margin. Mvgt Snitch |
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Both were bland but I got snitch with the current event and some what harsher bar
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Sun Tzu
Join Date: Mar 2018
Location: Atlanta, GA
Posts: 550
Battle Record: 13-6
Champed - Battle Arena League
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Senior Member
Join Date: Sep 2013
Posts: 253
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i got snitch. little more creative, had better impact then the angle chyeaah took
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Upset Champion
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: West Mids
Posts: 3,861
Battle Record: 57-49
Accomplishments - 50 Wins
Champed - BA Rookie Tourney
- 1-2 Punch League (x2)
- Pandemonium Cypher
- 1-2 Punch league Season 9
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