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Old 03-18-2019, 07:37 PM   #1
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adonis:
very poetically driven with high emotion.. def digging the rhyme structure as well, it unfolded with a heart beat type pulse.. the vocab was strong and well used.. the topic play on it was on point and all in all a dope verse..

master:
was cool, i slightly smaller made to seem stretched verse when compared against adonis but cool none the less.. story wise it had alot more action in direction but was failing on the description, though dont get me wrong it was choc full of it.. vocab was nice and delivery was on point..good drop

vote= adonis

just a more compact verse imo, good battle guys and g/l
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