Loast Vs. MAINESPITZ - LOAST WINS, 4-2

[Atomic]

this fagg0ts a dyke, backhand 'em & fracture his sight,
hit em w/ a lo blow <-- but that's just him on any saturday night!
didn't believe me? I even said you'd get wrecked bitch,
kid won't LIVE UP to our expectations, lo will be dead in a second!
u ghostwrite? nothing but wackness is what this herb will lend,
b/c theres no POINT to your TEXT, this isn't fucking words w/ friends.
low tier is clearly where this fgt would rank,
so plz keep it 100, even though that's less than u have in ur bank.
i read 1 line in ur verse & thought mannn thats enough, please..
cuz even OckSee's; he's goin down.. it's the only way BarZ will SuckSeed!
ur a shy little queer, u got no skill so stop hiding ur fear,
u spittin dope?!
i'd have to take 'em under my wing cuz that's NOT gonna fly around here!
my hands'll wrap around ur fuckin neck & i'll clench hard till u choke,
fucking ironic your NAME is BARS cuz i can't NAME a BAR that you've wrote.

gl

[Flow]

Originally Posted by Loast

I'm a pistol popper.. hit shit talkers, run ya mouth and i'll fuck up ya world
u eva see maine squeeze back on a nigga i bare hug his bitch as i'm fuckin his girl
psht was alright
BarZ. is back that means bars are back, watch what u say or i'm bruisin ya jaw
n get stick in ya mouth with such precise ur dentist will thank me for doin his job
no
Atomics cool but ur new alias should come with a homosexual clause
behind ya name mysteries involved n can only be solved with a hysterical pause
wasn't feeling it
Fag! Mainespitz? nah, he gotta deep throat when he honestly tries
shit, u dick ride n lose so much it would be nuts if this fag didn't swallow his pride
lmao that was fresh
I seen ya battle with Metts and to beat me your gonna have to cheat to win
cuz Joe Jackson up so bad i wont be surprised if he bleached his skin
meh was alright
my schemes is sick, I drop bombs on rats when these cats see me workin
Atomic bombs wouldn't harm a fly.. let alone spark fear in a japanese person
not sure how this really directs at mainz
how the fuck do u exceed high expectations when your shits harmless and trash
I can make a lower case about everything u write that a educate a kindergarten class
nice fresh again
Barz,


you have a fresh take on battling hopefully you will keep that because theres to many clones walking around here with the same shit, however you do need more direction in your punches and that's what let a few of these bars down.

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=6655
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=6497

Originally Posted by MAINESPITZ

this fagg0ts a dyke, backhand 'em & fracture his sight,
hit em w/ a lo blow <-- but that's just him on any saturday night!
lol pretty easy but I liked it
didn't believe me? I even said you'd get wrecked bitch,
kid won't LIVE UP to our expectations, lo will be dead in a second!
nah didn't even rhyme lol poor effort
u ghostwrite? nothing but wackness is what this herb will lend,
b/c theres no POINT to your TEXT, this isn't fucking words w/ friends.
nah the direction and execution totally lost, wording let it down
low tier is clearly where this fgt would rank,
so plz keep it 100, even though that's less than u have in ur bank.
meh this was alright but pretty simple not much sting
i read 1 line in ur verse & thought mannn thats enough, please..
cuz even OckSee's; he's goin down.. it's the only way BarZ will SuckSeed!
this was alright but the wording again wasn't great set up could of been better
ur a shy little queer, u got no skill so stop hiding ur fear,
u spittin dope?!
i'd have to take 'em under my wing cuz that's NOT gonna fly around here!
meh not for me
my hands'll wrap around ur fuckin neck & i'll clench hard till u choke,
fucking ironic your NAME is BARS cuz i can't NAME a BAR that you've wrote.
lol I liked this

gl

You are improving mainz and I think you have the layout right but your choosing the wrong concepts and/or not making them hit hard enough. You want to hurt him more...

meh this was a difficult one.... I liked Loast and the freshness that he brought but he needs some better execution if he wants those concepts to not get lost on some folk...

Mainz had a number of misses and where he hit was mostly weak stuff however I feel he had more hits overall.

Vote Mainz...

But Loast I see you causing some damage around here.

Originally Posted by Loast

I'm a pistol popper.. hit shit talkers, run ya mouth and i'll fuck up ya world
u eva see maine squeeze back on a nigga i bare hug his bitch as i'm fuckin his girl
--ok--
BarZ. is back that means bars are back, watch what u say or i'm bruisin ya jaw
n get stick in ya mouth with such precise ur dentist will thank me for doin his job
--wording fucked u here--
Atomics cool but ur new alias should come with a homosexual clause
behind ya name mysteries involved n can only be solved with a hysterical pause
--i think im missing something here dog--
Fag! Mainespitz? nah, he gotta deep throat when he honestly tries
shit, u dick ride n lose so much it would be nuts if this fag didn't swallow his pride
--cool--
I seen ya battle with Metts and to beat me your gonna have to cheat to win
cuz Joe Jackson up so bad i wont be surprised if he bleached his skin
--jackson and jack, son arent pronounced the same... it least for me. ill give the benefit og the doubt tho, but bleached his skin really aint that much of a diss anyway..
my schemes is sick, I drop bombs on rats when these cats see me workin
Atomic bombs wouldn't harm a fly.. let alone spark fear in a japanese person
--this is just too obvious--
how the fuck do u exceed high expectations when your shits harmless and trash
I can make a lower case about everything u write that a educate a kindergarten class
--alright--
Barz,




http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=6655
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=6497

Originally Posted by Atomic

this fagg0ts a dyke, backhand 'em & fracture his sight,
hit em w/ a lo blow <-- but that's just him on any saturday night!
--word, wording is still ur biggest problem duke--
didn't believe me? I even said you'd get wrecked bitch,
kid won't LIVE UP to our expectations, lo will be dead in a second!
--dont like it--
u ghostwrite? nothing but wackness is what this herb will lend,
b/c theres no POINT to your TEXT, this isn't fucking words w/ friends.
--this is a good concept but the execution doesnt hit him as hard as it could--
low tier is clearly where this fgt would rank,
so plz keep it 100, even though that's less than u have in ur bank.
--once again, i like the concept... u could make his idea hit way harder imo tho--
i read 1 line in ur verse & thought mannn thats enough, please..
cuz even OckSee's; he's goin down.. it's the only way BarZ will SuckSeed!
--lol, yo thats just kind of corny. made me laff tho--
ur a shy little queer, u got no skill so stop hiding ur fear,
u spittin dope?!
i'd have to take 'em under my wing cuz that's NOT gonna fly around here!
--ive seen the same concept before but u put a different spin on it. I think your problem is you dont make your concepts direct enough. you make a connection but its not hitting ur opponent that hard. like that shit aint gonna fly around here/ under my wing. i mean the connection works fine. but u just gotta hit em in the mouth if u get my drift--
my hands'll wrap around ur fuckin neck & i'll clench hard till u choke,
fucking ironic your NAME is BARS cuz i can't NAME a BAR that you've wrote.
--ok--

gl

Maines wording did him in

his concepts were so much better than BarZ were but he just didnt execute them or word them in the best way imo

BarZ dog, u didnt come with great concepts.

Ive seen u do much better.

This is the old case of concepts vs wording for me

gimme a minute ill be back w. vote

EDIT

thought about it

Creativity over wording. At least in this case

V/ Atomic

[Xnub]

Originally Posted by Loast

I'm a pistol popper.. hit shit talkers, run ya mouth and i'll fuck up ya world
u eva see maine squeeze back on a nigga i bare hug his bitch as i'm fuckin his girl
just eh for me.. flip was cool, conneciiton was a little off
BarZ. is back that means bars are back, watch what u say or i'm bruisin ya jaw
n get stick in ya mouth with such precise ur dentist will thank me for doin his job
wording? typo? na... missed
Atomics cool but ur new alias should come with a homosexual clause
behind ya name mysteries involved n can only be solved with a hysterical pause
ok..
Fag! Mainespitz? nah, he gotta deep throat when he honestly tries
shit, u dick ride n lose so much it would be nuts if this fag didn't swallow his pride
again, cool concept.. the wording made the connection seem off tho
I seen ya battle with Metts and to beat me your gonna have to cheat to win
cuz Joe Jackson up so bad i wont be surprised if he bleached his skin
fresh, that wordplay was dope
my schemes is sick, I drop bombs on rats when these cats see me workin
Atomic bombs wouldn't harm a fly.. let alone spark fear in a japanese person
na... thought it could've been executed much better. Punch was weak
how the fuck do u exceed high expectations when your shits harmless and trash
I can make a lower case about everything u write that a educate a kindergarten class
eh...
Barz,




http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=6655
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=6497

Originally Posted by Atomic

this fagg0ts a dyke, backhand 'em & fracture his sight,
hit em w/ a lo blow <-- but that's just him on any saturday night!
na...
didn't believe me? I even said you'd get wrecked bitch,
kid won't LIVE UP to our expectations, lo will be dead in a second!
huh? oh.. like live "up"... lo(lows) dead in seconds. ok.... na.
u ghostwrite? nothing but wackness is what this herb will lend,
b/c theres no POINT to your TEXT, this isn't fucking words w/ friends.
seen it done way fresher, but I'll give u this one.
low tier is clearly where this fgt would rank,
so plz keep it 100, even though that's less than u have in ur bank.
I liked this, simple yet effective.. connection was easy to see
i read 1 line in ur verse & thought mannn thats enough, please..
cuz even OckSee's; he's goin down.. it's the only way BarZ will SuckSeed!
lol @ suckseed... props for effort, was a stretch tho... didn't hit w/ me
ur a shy little queer, u got no skill so stop hiding ur fear,
u spittin dope?!
i'd have to take 'em under my wing cuz that's NOT gonna fly around here!
could've been executed better, and the concept is played to death (under my wing)
my hands'll wrap around ur fuckin neck & i'll clench hard till u choke,
fucking ironic your NAME is BARS cuz i can't NAME a BAR that you've wrote.
I htink this could've been worded better to make this punch hit, the setup didn't compliment ur punch at all

gl

I enjoy'd reading Barz. verse... he seems a little rusty from what I remember, but MAINSPITZ came lazy here... and it show'd. I think this could've been way doper, but for what they brought Barz. edged this one.

mvgt: Barz.