Ryno vs DynamiCz - RYNO WINS

[bleak]

SOL Season 1
Wk 6

Due Thursday, Feb 28

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Max - 20 lines
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[Ryno]

Boooooy u ugly asf, pockets stuck in a rut, chicks rarely exchange w/ this fake
If a bitch saw ‘Dyn & dashed’...it’s cos she knew one way or another she’d pay for the date
It’s a storm comin if I’m dumpin, either get out the way or ur ass gettin slayed
Sprayin this lame! The ‘bulldogs runnin through this square’ like they’re avoidin the rain
Shit is insane...No games, surround em w/ lasers & follow it up w/ 5 claps
This ain’t Galaga, once ur beamed up there’s no chance of u gettin ur life back
The old me showed mercy, now if a spirit needs to be lifted I’m the 1st one they call
We all go through a phase...but when I’m finished he’ll be able to do it through walls
Speak when spoken too nigga, make a peep & u’ll meet ur maker overnight
Blast em twice! If u venture souls gonna journey waaaaay beyond the afterlife
Dawg r u drunk? Clown ur hospital bound if u thought u could fuck w/ me
Clutch & squeeze! Think AA, he’ll be hesitant to pick the cans up after recovery
I pull strings in the hood, 1 phone call & he’ll be on a mission up to God
If he pulls strings in the hood...i bet my life he’s hiding headphones on the job
I’m the people’s champ, the stadium’ll fill up just to see this dudes skull leakin
You can’t beat this! Dawg I’ll slam a bow above ya head like it’s all star weekend
Text ain’t dead, these old heads swarmin threads like some vultures
I’ll prove I’m no poser! Bitch I’ve got enough gunplay to shift you AND ‘Tha Culture’
Kill it squirt, ya raps r dirt & the big names leavin ya verses merked
Fuckin twerp! Ur the Tesla of text, u BARELY get recognition for ya ‘current work’

The Beast

[DynamiCz]

Act out im gettin direct..Whateva gang u claim take 1 for the set
When one strap suspend from the shoulder like Ralph Breaks The Internet
Subtract the loose ends, they will have to carry one--im reducing
God when i shoot this 'Iron in Vain', it aint a shot giving Infusions
The guns stay wit Victor, that mean silencer i keep it on the Hush
Extendo i drop the shit--then start shaking the handle more then a courtesy flush
New clip long as a dreadlock--quit the pretend or we find whatever bar he in
The can i bust stay smoking, the wrong movement they better hope Rastafarian
See u & ya bitch, damn! What i got by deceit...u'll think im pulling a scam
Chopper skyview the street--I get live, it aint the news covering a Traffic Jam
A funeral the only way u leaving..black hurse extend for them to grieve in
From the right angle, u get ya fabric threaded with the needle like Modern Weaving
To mention..Week 3 spoke u wanted Dy now, they should have paid it attention
Now im slicing at a risk, they thinking im the one ask for Suicide Prevention
What u sale corrupt, proper with ya gunbars, wwe kno u aint tough enough
Shots turn a shirt inside out, then i leave u hanging by the tag like OfferUp
U kno my temperpedic...a mattress never felt too appealing
When the peaceful in your stomach, it can leave u with a inside gut feeling
Drastic! If it's static, I can pay your old bitch the extra taxes
Beam, I let ya X-ray your insides...she givin study for a MRI in Practice

[BodySnatcher]

On my phone so yeah...

Dyn & Dash was cool, bulldog was ehhh, Galaga was nice. I fuck with it. Phase had a nice touch on it, good bar. Afterlife was meh. I like pick up the cans, dope. Pull strings was ok. All Star weekend was decent. Jesus that culture bar couldve been dumb nice but I was let down by the ending. Current work was kinda cool/personal.

Ralph was fire. Iron in vain was cool. Courtesy flush was banging. Rastafarian was ok. Traffic jam was cool had nice imagery. Modern weaving was ehh. Risk/wrist was ok but read a lil off to me. Offerup idk what that is, gut feeling wasn't bad, x-ray was a cool concept.

This was a dope battle. Props to both for dropping early. I got Dyn in a close one but Ryno came out hard this week with Galaga and pick up cans. I think both had some misses but dy had lotb imo with Ralph and courtesy flush was dope too. Good shit boys.

[Shia Labruh]

Shit is insane...No games, surround em w/ lasers & follow it up w/ 5 claps
This ain’t Galaga, once ur beamed up there’s no chance of u gettin ur life back
The old me showed mercy, now if a spirit needs to be lifted I’m the 1st one they call
We all go through a phase...but when I’m finished he’ll be able to do it through walls
Dawg r u drunk? Clown ur hospital bound if u thought u could fuck w/ me
Clutch & squeeze! Think AA, he’ll be hesitant to pick the cans up after recovery (talk to em, haha)

Vs

Act out im gettin direct..Whateva gang u claim take 1 for the set
When one strap suspend from the shoulder like Ralph Breaks The Internet
The guns stay wit Victor, that mean silencer i keep it on the Hush
Extendo i drop the shit--then start shaking the handle more then a courtesy flush (talk to em!)
New clip long as a dreadlock--quit the pretend or we find whatever bar he in
The can i bust stay smoking, the wrong movement they better hope Rastafarian
See u & ya bitch, damn! What i got by deceit...u'll think im pulling a scam
Chopper skyview the street--I get live, it aint the news covering a Traffic Jam

Nice read. Dy started to die down at the end, but he has a very confident swag wit his bars that cannot be denied. The slang show he knows bout that. ryno don't seem like a slouch eitherfrfr.
Ryno had better lows imo but I felt dy quoted were probably a bit stronger than ry quotes.
I see ry get put in some tough battles, & I hate to vote against because I thoroughly enjoy his verses, but I gotta give it to dy barely. His loss were pretty low at the end & almost lost it imo. But he cam through.
Keep the great reads coming. I'm picking up from you guys fr.

Vote- dynamics

[Resin M-I-C]

dyn and dashard was aight, good
wasnt feelin bulldog, gotta have a crazy creative twist to pull that off
fucked with galaga heavy
phase was cool
wasnt feelin the afterlife jawn
AA was aight, cant believe this is the first aa/cans line ive seen or heard lol
headphones gave me a chuckle, funny shit
bow was simple yet effective af, banger
culture was aiiight
wasnt feelin the closer

vs

ralph was nasty, glad u liked the movie lol
vain a lil old and light
courtesy flush was a banger
ehhhh rastafarian
chopper/news been done but this was ok
not feelin modern weaving
risk didnt hit, that was a reach
offerip was niiiiiice
gut feelin was a lil off
closer was decent

botw for me right now.. some nasty lines on both verses.. after reading it a several times it all came down to dyna’s last 2 lines, it felll short for me and ryno got him with one more good line.. solid battle fellas, i’m a real fan of both and this could go either way but

v ryno

[bleak]

2-1 Dy up
@Blue Bayou @Dominate @Aero @Cyrax @Prozac @Useless

[Sharp]

Boooooy u ugly asf, pockets stuck in a rut, chicks rarely exchange w/ this fake
If a bitch saw ‘Dyn & dashed’...it’s cos she knew one way or another she’d pay for the date
Shit is insane...No games, surround em w/ lasers & follow it up w/ 5 claps
This ain’t Galaga, once ur beamed up there’s no chance of u gettin ur life back
The old me showed mercy, now if a spirit needs to be lifted I’m the 1st one they call
We all go through a phase...but when I’m finished he’ll be able to do it through walls
Speak when spoken too nigga, make a peep & u’ll meet ur maker overnight
Blast em twice! If u venture souls gonna journey waaaaay beyond the afterlife
Dawg r u drunk? Clown ur hospital bound if u thought u could fuck w/ me
Clutch & squeeze! Think AA, he’ll be hesitant to pick the cans up after recovery
I pull strings in the hood, 1 phone call & he’ll be on a mission up to God
If he pulls strings in the hood...i bet my life he’s hiding headphones on the job
I’m the people’s champ, the stadium’ll fill up just to see this dudes skull leakin
You can’t beat this! Dawg I’ll slam a bow above ya head like it’s all star weekend



Act out im gettin direct..Whateva gang u claim take 1 for the set
When one strap suspend from the shoulder like Ralph Breaks The Internet
Subtract the loose ends, they will have to carry one--im reducing
God when i shoot this 'Iron in Vain', it aint a shot giving Infusions
The guns stay wit Victor, that mean silencer i keep it on the Hush
Extendo i drop the shit--then start shaking the handle more then a courtesy flush
See u & ya bitch, damn! What i got by deceit...u'll think im pulling a scam
Chopper skyview the street--I get live, it aint the news covering a Traffic Jam
What u sale corrupt, proper with ya gunbars, wwe kno u aint tough enough
Shots turn a shirt inside out, then i leave u hanging by the tag like OfferUp
Drastic! If it's static, I can pay your old bitch the extra taxes
Beam, I let ya X-ray your insides...she givin study for a MRI in Practice

On the fence about vain and gut feeling but they weren't as hot as the rest of all these

Man this is close as fuck. I went back and forth on a few bars and could see either one taking it but I just wound up with one more quote from Ryno. Why all these wreckit Ralph bars lately though?

For real, good shit, this is a season highlight but I got bash by a nose

Ryno

[Zaddy]

Ryno

Dyn&dash - played on him
Bulldog - not feelin
Galaga - nice
Phase thru walls - good I liked this
Sauls afterlife - not feelin
AA - alright
Strings in the hood - lmaooooo this was dope I loved it
All star weekend - this was pretty cool
That culture - nah miss
Tesla - nah didn’t like, execution/wording


Vs


Ralph - had to look this one up, nice line
Iron in vain - a bit wordy, decent
Courtney flush - had to look this up too lol was creative and good
Rastafarian - I liked the setup better than the second line, meh
Traffic jam - this was ok
Modern weaving - ok again
Suicide prevention - a miss for me
Offer up - dopeeee
Gut feeling - wasn’t feelin it
X-ray - Decent


Sorry for the brief breakdowns but I wanted to hurry up and get my vote in before nazis closed the battle. Ryno had my favorite hits here but nore misses than dyna, also dyna had more of a consistent verse.


Vote DynamiCz

[Dominate]

Boooooy u ugly asf, pockets stuck in a rut, chicks rarely exchange w/ this fake
If a bitch saw ‘Dyn & dashed’...it’s cos she knew one way or another she’d pay for the date
Heh cool. Flipped well.
It’s a storm comin if I’m dumpin, either get out the way or ur ass gettin slayed
Sprayin this lame! The ‘bulldogs runnin through this square’ like they’re avoidin the rain
Ehhh. The wp is OK but the flip is light.
Shit is insane...No games, surround em w/ lasers & follow it up w/ 5 claps
This ain’t Galaga, once ur beamed up there’s no chance of u gettin ur life back
niiice. Really good.
The old me showed mercy, now if a spirit needs to be lifted I’m the 1st one they call
We all go through a phase...but when I’m finished he’ll be able to do it through walls
Set up and worded well. Phase wp was done a lot many years ago but I haven't seen for a while, combined with the wording this was cool
Speak when spoken too nigga, make a peep & u’ll meet ur maker overnight
Blast em twice! If u venture souls gonna journey waaaaay beyond the afterlife
Not bad
Dawg r u drunk? Clown ur hospital bound if u thought u could fuck w/ me
Clutch & squeeze! Think AA, he’ll be hesitant to pick the cans up after recovery
Feel like this should be played but I don't recall it, it was fresh to me and was a good line. Worded well again. Nice multis on this one too - better than previous bars, good job.
I pull strings in the hood, 1 phone call & he’ll be on a mission up to God
If he pulls strings in the hood...i bet my life he’s hiding headphones on the job
Creative. I'd probably call them 'cords' rather than 'strings' but eh, it was a fresh idea, not bad.
I’m the people’s champ, the stadium’ll fill up just to see this dudes skull leakin
You can’t beat this! Dawg I’ll slam a bow above ya head like it’s all star weekend
I don't get this. Google didn't help me.
Text ain’t dead, these old heads swarmin threads like some vultures
I’ll prove I’m no poser! Bitch I’ve got enough gunplay to shift you AND ‘Tha Culture’
Nah too simple. Nothingish. Attack/gunplay bars need a good wordplay or hard punch or at least a slick rhyme scheme or something
Kill it squirt, ya raps r dirt & the big names leavin ya verses merked
Fuckin twerp! Ur the Tesla of text, u BARELY get recognition for ya ‘current work’
Ehhh nah. Maybe if you'd set it up like "My bars get quoted from years ago..."



Act out im gettin direct..Whateva gang u claim take 1 for the set
When one strap suspend from the shoulder like Ralph Breaks The Internet
Eh. The only part with a double meaning is "strap". Needed a harsher/punchier flip than a "like..."
Subtract the loose ends, they will have to carry one--im reducing
God when i shoot this 'Iron in Vain', it aint a shot giving Infusions
'shot' and 'vein/vain' wp are pretty played. Iron/nutrient is fresher. The way you combined it all made the wp OK to me but the flip is light and this could've been set up/worded better. You're saying you're shooting in vain (i.e. without success)
The guns stay wit Victor, that mean silencer i keep it on the Hush
Extendo i drop the shit--then start shaking the handle more then a courtesy flush
LMAO. Good here. Like this.
New clip long as a dreadlock--quit the pretend or we find whatever bar he in
The can i bust stay smoking, the wrong movement they better hope Rastafarian
Not bad. can-I-bus'/canabis is a bit of a reach phonetically
See u & ya bitch, damn! What i got by deceit...u'll think im pulling a scam
Chopper skyview the street--I get live, it aint the news covering a Traffic Jam
Nice! this is good. I like the set up wp too.
A funeral the only way u leaving..black hurse extend for them to grieve in
From the right angle, u get ya fabric threaded with the needle like Modern Weaving
Nah. I can't fathom "fabric threaded with the needle" being used in any context besides weaving.
To mention..Week 3 spoke u wanted Dy now, they should have paid it attention
Now im slicing at a risk, they thinking im the one ask for Suicide Prevention
Nah. Risk/wrist doesn't work at all for me. "you wanted Dy/Suicide" was OKish
What u sale corrupt, proper with ya gunbars, wwe kno u aint tough enough
Shots turn a shirt inside out, then i leave u hanging by the tag like OfferUp
Leave you hanging by the tag/OfferUp was cool. Set could've been better - how could shots turn a shirt inside out? You would've done better to abandon this as a gunbar and just say you'd grab his shirt and pin him up. The main elements of the bar are fine, it's still a cool, just could've easily been made better I think
U kno my temperpedic...a mattress never felt too appealing
When the peaceful in your stomach, it can leave u with a inside gut feeling
Hmmmm had potential but not quite. "Peaceful" isn't really addressed in your flip... maybe something like "Peaceful in your stomach, but you gonna be feeling nauseous"
Drastic! If it's static, I can pay your old bitch the extra taxes
Beam, I let ya X-ray your insides...she givin study for a MRI in Practice
Liked the ex-ray idea. Not bad.



Well this is unhelpful asf but I gotta give it to Ryno. Sorry mods. Dyna had traffic jam and courtesy flush that were dope vs the only really heavy one from Ry being Galaga, but 2 vs 1 big hits doesn't outweigh that Ryno's wp was generally worded better all throughout - that's a big one for me.

V/ Ryno

[bleak]

3-3
@Blue Bayou @Jabari Black come on champ we need a vote here @Aero

[Amen]

Originally Posted by Ryno

Boooooy u ugly asf, pockets stuck in a rut, chicks rarely exchange w/ this fake
If a bitch saw ‘Dyn & dashed’...it’s cos she knew one way or another she’d pay for the date
Wasn't feeling this one much. Appreciate the creative route, tho.
It’s a storm comin if I’m dumpin, either get out the way or ur ass gettin slayed
Sprayin this lame! The ‘bulldogs runnin through this square’ like they’re avoidin the rain
Don't like it. Seems like you tried to do too much here with flow.
Shit is insane...No games, surround em w/ lasers & follow it up w/ 5 claps
This ain’t Galaga, once ur beamed up there’s no chance of u gettin ur life back
Good.
The old me showed mercy, now if a spirit needs to be lifted I’m the 1st one they call
We all go through a phase...but when I’m finished he’ll be able to do it through walls
I fucks w/ this one.
Speak when spoken too nigga, make a peep & u’ll meet ur maker overnight
Blast em twice! If u venture souls gonna journey waaaaay beyond the afterlife
Ok. 2 of the same concepts back to back. Paranormal/afterlife shit.
Dawg r u drunk? Clown ur hospital bound if u thought u could fuck w/ me
Clutch & squeeze! Think AA, he’ll be hesitant to pick the cans up after recovery
Dope.
I pull strings in the hood, 1 phone call & he’ll be on a mission up to God
If he pulls strings in the hood...i bet my life he’s hiding headphones on the job
Cool, but set up is nearly too close to a few bars ago - stating you'll have him meet his maker. Sounds redundant.
I’m the people’s champ, the stadium’ll fill up just to see this dudes skull leakin
You can’t beat this! Dawg I’ll slam a bow above ya head like it’s all star weekend
Not feeling this one.
Text ain’t dead, these old heads swarmin threads like some vultures
I’ll prove I’m no poser! Bitch I’ve got enough gunplay to shift you AND ‘Tha Culture’
Good.
Kill it squirt, ya raps r dirt & the big names leavin ya verses merked
Fuckin twerp! Ur the Tesla of text, u BARELY get recognition for ya ‘current work’
Ok.

Originally Posted by DynamiCz

Act out im gettin direct..Whateva gang u claim take 1 for the set
When one strap suspend from the shoulder like Ralph Breaks The Internet
NO idea what this is referencing.
Subtract the loose ends, they will have to carry one--im reducing
God when i shoot this 'Iron in Vain', it aint a shot giving Infusions
Light.
The guns stay wit Victor, that mean silencer i keep it on the Hush
Extendo i drop the shit--then start shaking the handle more then a courtesy flush
Lol... Cool.
New clip long as a dreadlock--quit the pretend or we find whatever bar he in
The can i bust stay smoking, the wrong movement they better hope Rastafarian
Huh?
See u & ya bitch, damn! What i got by deceit...u'll think im pulling a scam
Chopper skyview the street--I get live, it aint the news covering a Traffic Jam
Lol choppa bars... This was an ok flip, tho.
A funeral the only way u leaving..black hurse extend for them to grieve in
From the right angle, u get ya fabric threaded with the needle like Modern Weaving
Nah.
To mention..Week 3 spoke u wanted Dy now, they should have paid it attention
Now im slicing at a risk, they thinking im the one ask for Suicide Prevention
Nice.
What u sale corrupt, proper with ya gunbars, wwe kno u aint tough enough
Shots turn a shirt inside out, then i leave u hanging by the tag like OfferUp
Nice.
U kno my temperpedic...a mattress never felt too appealing
When the peaceful in your stomach, it can leave u with a inside gut feeling
Ok flip.
Drastic! If it's static, I can pay your old bitch the extra taxes
Beam, I let ya X-ray your insides...she givin study for a MRI in Practice
Wasn't feeling the execution here. Concept was ok, tho.

Cool battle but IMO - Ryno had the more effective punches here.

v/Ryno

[Saint]

Galaga
Phase
AA
String

Ralph
Courtesy Flush
Suicide Risk
Offerup

I'm swinging it Ry's way...I think he had the better highs
and wording was better overall. Dy had some good stuff & was probably more original which made it close imo but some things came off s&f here & there..

V Ryno